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for Ryou and Bakura

by MandyWallace

person Shawaazu
schedule November 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought I reviewed this already. . . . . . . . . . . . . . anyway, please continue!
person celestial angel
schedule February 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your story, but it moves too fast in the middle. But I really like it! You seriously need to continue!!
person thepervyaoifangirl
schedule September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmm........i like it but you should'nt leave it at that write the next chapter,lots of things could happen in this story.......good job so far on the chapter write more b/r cuz i love the yaoi! ^^ *wink*
person Sera
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh! It's good! Please continue!
person Luna Riddle
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
very nice beginning, looking forward to seeing where this will go :)