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June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Again, the chapter's way too short. At least 1000 words a chapter will make an avid fan such as me happy and giddy ;-D
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June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hm.. interesting chapter... but short ;_; oh why do you torture me so! T-T *cries* this story has me hooked i NEED to know more @_@ more more more!! muahahahah >:D O.o
update soon? before my yami eats me alive... oh btw i think you loaded chapter 4 twice by mistake ^^;;
keep up great work! *claps* *gives flowers*
update soon? before my yami eats me alive... oh btw i think you loaded chapter 4 twice by mistake ^^;;
keep up great work! *claps* *gives flowers*
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love it more than turkey on thanksgiving and more than chicken on christmas!!!!!
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lovely!!! what the hell is illuminati *pokes brain* oh well next chapter!!!
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
woot!! this is getting gooooood you really get the suspense going! its pure torture not being able to just turn the page and keep reading ;_; so i look forward to you updates. so they will be a bit longer right? right? well, thank yor cor continuing :D you update, i review ^.^ i just love this fic, i havent seen any thing likethis yet.. original and GOOOOOOD will there be a lemon? or lemons? ooo i cant wait if there is :D yay!!! great fic! excellent update soon ;D
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
SO CRUEL! you left me waiting.. then such a short chapter *cries* ;_; update update! my hunger for this story cannot be sated with such a short chapter!! great fic though... *applauds* i wanna see more!! more!! i mean read more lol :D kudos!
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! this story has an excellent beginning!! it kept me interested, got me into the character (even if i know its yami) i get a good deal about his persona in in this story!!! your descriptions are awesome too. Also have a great sense of timing, and pacing. i really really really really hope you update soon!!! great great story!!! and i'm VERY** curious to see what you have yugi like in this fic. is he gunna be a seme? (thats rare, but interesting) please continue! *cheers* *claps* wooot! i will definately wait for next chapter and review again!!!!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it, please keep going! I haven't read the book, but this story has me hooked. No fair! If you don't update fast, I'll have to! ve!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Your story is really interesting, and very original, I hope you can update soon, I love it!!!!. See ya soon!!
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May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....wow.....I can't believe you stopped at that!! That's so cruel!!! And what is with people and short chapters huh??? Honestly haven'u peu people heard of Cruel and Unusual Punishment?!?!!?!? Oh, btw, it case you couldn't tell, I'm begging you to hurry up with another chappy. :-)