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I hope you do realize that this story is not yours in any way, shape or form. Taking out the names of the original characters and putting in the ones from another series does NOT, in any way, change the fthatthat this is PLAGARISM. In all honesty, you could be sued for this and I hope you listen to me when I say that this should be removed immediately; at the very most re-written as to not be an EXACT retelling of Angels and Demons. No, I am not suggesting this because I don’t like yaoi. Hell, I LOVE yaoi (it's my oxygen =D) and would have preferred Vittoria to have been a man. This is most certainly not a flame. It is merely a piece of advice from a girl who does not want to see a fellow author in trouble.

Woot!!! i luv this fic!! it rocks! so mysterious! *eats popcorn* icant wait to see what happens! good work ^.~

Ah, much better in the length ;-D And I like how things are unraveling for everyone. And I love Yami's character here....and felt some goosebumps of anticipation when you've mentioned in your story that Yugi's about to return to the lab.

Please update soon ;-D

WOOOOO this story is getting better and better!!!!!!! XD *dies of exitement* x_x well i cant wait for next update... i think the three chapers were a brain overload o_o NOT that its a bad thing!!! its great!!!! its funny beacuse ofthe way you write, it gives anie fie feeling.. like something is coming.... which makes the suspense great!!! great job!!! i luv this fic please update soon!! *gives you plushies and chocolate* write write!!! (i write too but i've been neglecting my stories.... >.>;;)

Ahh...thank goodness...an update. Short chapter 5 but the ending was a chiller. And you've ended the chapter with an ominous evil cliffie...how cruel of you ;-D

Ah, I love the descriptions! As short as this chapter was, I loved the way that it flowed....

Ah...I wish the chapters are longer. Maybuld\uld've combined the three chapters into one. Otherwise, everything's good. Please update very very soon and please let me know via email when you do ;-D

Good start, but too short....I'll be reading next chappie to see what happens next....

Much much better **applaud since the length of the chapter is longer than chapter one**. I love how you described Yami here (heart pounding like the rabid, lovesick fangirl that I am)....

BTW, would it be too much to ask if you could email me if you update this story? As of now, aff.net doesn't have the capability of letting avid readers know if the authors posted something new. Pretty please?

Thanks...and keep up with the good work...

Owww....the third chapter is short **sob**

Gotta read next chappie ;-D