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yay u updated!!! i like the chappie.. but why did u make yami's last name moutou and yugi's and solomns moutou too.. it kinda gets confusing.. that the only thing i had to add ^^; especially now since your talking about solomon, yami and yugi...

Hi, my dear ;-D

Much better chapter because of its length and the evil cliffie. I can't wait for the next one, which I hope would be a meaty chapter, too.

BTW, I'm also an author at fanfiction.net under Zatken. If you have time, check out my Yu-Gi-Oh, Yami no Matsuei, and Petshop of Horrors fanfics out there ;-D

Ay, my dear....*sob* the chapter's too short. Please update soon.

BTW, it's so good to receive an email from you ;-D

Hello, just a note to say that I've been enjoying reading your fiction. When next you update would you mind dropping me an email so that I can know to look for it?

and the plot thickens!!!!!! what shall happen next? *is exited to know* i shall find out by reading and reviewing the next 2 chapters posted muahahah >:D great chappie, you had me really into it. the way yami spoke is good too o.o you really gave him a story tellers voice lol
great job! (and like i said i am reviewing every chappie) ^.~

Ooo naughty parts lol another good chappie!!!! got to know the bakura in this story hehe onward to the next chappie! *hands you a cookie* good job btw :D

Aak!! why?!!!! *cries* you left me at a cliffy? and a really really really really bad cliffy?! Eek *panics* i gota know what he saw!!! you based this on a boightight? wow.. but be a really good book, o.o please update soon!!! please!! *tosses Arainaina some boxes of pocky* see sugar! you write now! please? ;.; i wanna know what happens >.<

Ay....the chapter's kinda short but I feel better knowing that there's a next one immediately after this. The lemon's kinda unexplored too, if you know what I mean. I can understand that brutal killers would probably not have any regard to the pleasure of their partner in bed, but it is expected that they would - to some degree - explore sex as an opportunity to express their dark sides with their partner....and even at times scare their partners since it's the fear from the other party which makes their bloods pump for more.

But nonetheless, I will be readihe nhe next chapter. The comment above is meant to be a constructive suggestion alone, especially since I love this story of yours...

Ah...the chapter where Yami explains the Illuminati was awesome :-D I liked how he explained things to Hawkins...

OMG....why did you have to leave us with an evil cliffie like that? What did he see? What did he see?

Oh.... *pouts*w I w I have to wait for the next update. Please update soon.