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October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am deeply saddened that you didn't continue. If you decided to now, I would thank you emmensly
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July 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
WHY THE HELL DO ALL THE GOOD STORYS NEVER GET DONE?
Sorry,It's just I've been reading a lot of unfinished storys lately and it's anoying.I truly liked it,I love how Jou can kill Seto just by not fighting with him.So far I've only found two authors who have figured that out.You and me.I think that the bold writing should go though.It's kinda....strange.Not that it's bad, but you tend to put the bold in the wrong spots,Just be carefull.Other than that,It's an awesome piece of literature and I enjoyed reading it.I hardly ever review,but you made an impression on me.
Sincerly,
Ladama
Sorry,It's just I've been reading a lot of unfinished storys lately and it's anoying.I truly liked it,I love how Jou can kill Seto just by not fighting with him.So far I've only found two authors who have figured that out.You and me.I think that the bold writing should go though.It's kinda....strange.Not that it's bad, but you tend to put the bold in the wrong spots,Just be carefull.Other than that,It's an awesome piece of literature and I enjoyed reading it.I hardly ever review,but you made an impression on me.
Sincerly,
Ladama
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fabulous so far! I love how you're incorporating lines from the manga and developing the characters using them as support. Everything you've written thus far is quite believable. I can tell this story has great potential. I look forward to reading future chapters.
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November 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is great so far. Please keep up the good work!! ^___^
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a realy good fic! i really hope you will update it soon!
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May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I got a little confused with all the flashbacks but other than that I think the story is great! I can't wait for the next update! ^_^