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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Uhm...Yeah ok, you need a bit of work on your spelling, maybe get someone to spell check for you, or use a program that does it for you. As for the story it was alright, I gave it a good rating. The ending however sucked major ass. *Shakes finger at story writer person.* I hope you will be continuing this story because no one knows what has happened to Tea and the other girl.
PS, you got a problem with Tea? Cause you pretty much kicked her to the curve.
Happens to be one of my favorite chars.
Anyways get to work on the second part.
PS, you got a problem with Tea? Cause you pretty much kicked her to the curve.
Happens to be one of my favorite chars.
Anyways get to work on the second part.
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June 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I just read the whole story and i've got one thing to say. That was awesome!! The story was original for a vampire story and I liked the lemons.You really left us at a cliffhanger though. I hope you plan on doing a sequel soon!!!