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for Frozen inside

by Silverdragons

person karasu-san
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I'm not leaving a signed review. That is my account name, so just look me up. Nifty story. I like it, but you just need to watch out for a few errors in spelling and every once in a while, a word goes missing. But I'm sure the missing word thing isnt' your fault; it happens to a lot of authors (even me). And if you don't know what I mean, it's when one word disappears and all you get is pieces of it. Yep. :3 MORE!!!
person sara
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude i love this series. ur doing a great job. plz update ASAP. i'll be waitin' laters (plus i rated it a 5)
person DragonDemonGurl
schedule March 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god i love this fic and dont worry i'v seen worse typo's! please continue the story soon! bye
person cdkobasiuk
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good fic. And now that you added in the other guys it is getting even more interesting. Good writing.

cdk
person secrets
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I was abused as a child, physically not sexually, so I can relate to the part about becoming frozen & dying inside. Anyway, definitely one of my favorite stories & I'll keep reading.
person Reili
schedule July 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Jounouchi gave Seto a little reality check. Muhaha. That's amusing. Is Seto going to stand up to his stepfather, now? He should shoot him. I have many firearms he can borrow. Yes, indeed. Well, I for one look forward to another update. And, just as a side question: Is everyone around sixteen/seventeen in this? Aside from Gozaboru and Mokuba, of course. Just wanted to know if their all the ages that they are in the show and such.

So, yeah. Ciao.
person Slayer
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seto's Step-dad"s a ass. Can I kill him? Please*gives puppy eyes*
person White Nymph
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! update!!!ah poor Seto, no wonder he's so mean to everyone! Did i say that already? anyway great chapter and keep up the typing
W N
person CrimsonDevil
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Makes a whine* Seto's my favorite character! *Rattles Frozen savagely* You kinky creature you! ....I like it.
person white Nymph
schedule June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you gonna write m
I
I hope so!
I want to See how Kaiba, deals with that low life!
It kinda bought a tear to my eye