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*blinks*

*bows to shak*

wow, that was truly and amazingly and utterly amazing (said amazing twice, didnt i) ... i loved how you did the whole beginning/end thing...

i dunno how many ways to say it, but i loved it and YES, it was WELL WRITTEN! ... you seem confident in your writing that you know where you are going with this and you've left me wanting more... so bad babe, you are like an addiction i cant shake (lol- where's that from?) ^_^ hehe ... you know how your lemons affect me *wi
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this was EXCELLENT *thumbs up*

way to go babe, ur hard effort shows!

~diablo

Gods, I can't believe I'm all choked up over them ending it! I did have to laugh at the vision of Seto getting pushed into the tub. That was funny. I just about howled at the "who's your dragon" question....

Yami doesn't blow hot and cold, he freakin' blows Antartica and Death Valley! Shiiiit, he called out Seth's name?? oooooo

Gee, thanks for scaring me when you said "Well, it's done". I almost screeched. *G* Ah, I can't wait for the next chapter. Especially with the promises of more tortures for them.

KB

Wow what an intense chapter. So much up/down emotions and blistering onceonce again. Underwater blow jobs? Never tried it. And Roberto? Naming dildoes. most intersting. Maybe I should buy a few and name them too. You should have them name each other's cocks too. And the ancient flashbacks were so wonderfully angsty. And you are completely killing me with this corncob conversation we are having. I just mighte toe to do something about this. Lovely chapter as always, smoldering sex and head ningning angst.

cant wait for more of your twisted sexual tale--

much love--


cve

ouch, this chapter was harsh...i felt so bad for both of them. and i cant begin to imagine the schemes youve got planned for them. ^__^ hmmm the last line was definitely something. fom Hamlet, you say? im going to study that in two years. hope its good. anyway, keep it coming. shameless smut is such a nice break from work, ne? lol

Hmmm...this is the first time I've ever reviewed a story at adultfanfiction.net. Anyhoo, I think your story rocks. It kicks major ass. I love it, I love it, I loved it. The best Seto/Yami fanfic I've ever read. It's just..so good. I really like how different your story is fthe the other S/Y stories out there. Yours is whole different element, completely a stand out. The screw up relationship of Seto and Yami is so f*cked up and I love it. They can never stop their everyday cycle, can they? It's like deja vu everyday. Is Seto really gonna break up with Yami? And who will Yami bring as his date to Duke's party? God, the suse! se! ^_^ Please update asap! And would you please write more Seto/Yami stories?! That would be sooooo coool! You should start now! Or write the next chapter of Possession right now! Watever, just write either one! ^-^ Hurry!

why, WHY do u tease me so!? Seto ended it???!!! no way! ah crap, now i cant wait for the next chapter! but other than that awfully mean cliffie, this chapter was awesome (as usual). those flashbacks are getting interesting. kindoniconic that yami acts now like seth did back in egypt. and oh joy for yami, he got to be dominate for once! has that even happened before in this story? duke sure is funny in this story, him and seto have something in common. anywayz, hope that new chapter is up soon! great work!

o.O Dude...Yami is scarily possessive. Great work!

Shakster, pleeaase don't make Yami and Seto break up! They're so good together! Please please please please!
Okay, nuff of the begging now. Less smut but another great chapter none the less.

You. Are. Brilliant.

Seriously.

I love the parallel between Yami and Seth - kind of a warped role reversal. The whole series is awesome. Well done!

Tanya~

I think I may have forgotten to review again. *sigh* Sorry.

This story is so awesome. I absolutely love to read it. There are so many twists and turns I never know what's going to happen next. Love the "sometime-ish" running-gag too. It's been so long since I've heard it used.

Thanks for the quick update. I hope the next one comes soon, but if it doesn't I'll understand.

~Blue September~