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Stupid aff.net loggin' me out after a time...

Great job with 6 and 7! Oh man, it's so angsty, but so hot, and just...wow, plot twists here there and everywhere! ^_^

i finally read it after leaving it to savor last in the 'updates' i found...hmm enter mahad and seto's the one with the eating problems...interesting...i'm itching all over waiting for the next update already...gahhhh!! i'll talk to you in aol later...irie...we go sight ;)

Chapter 7 is holy fucking awesome, I can't even BLINK when I read it! Gosh...I am completely drawn to this story...
I like the way you portray Bakura..and you add an awesome twist too; Mahad! Is he really Mahaado's reincarnation O.o? Did Yami ly cly cheat on Seth back in Ancient Egypt? Ooooh, the angst is thrilling me!

awesome! as usual, of course, but i still had to say it. poor yami and seto! they should just suck it up and get back together (pun intended ^_^) cant wait for the next chapter!

Oh wow... dark chapter. For me anyway. The "good-bye" at Yami's house was hard to read. Bleah, been there done that kinda thing.

Ooo wait, Mahad??! Ahhh, I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm not sure if it's the interview or Mahad that's gonna be more, ummm, fun.... *smirks*

Damn fantastic chapter!!

KB

Hmmm... If I didn't think they'd kill (molest?) each other, I'd lock them into a closet and make them make up. Ha, like that'd happen. *sniff* It was painful to see them act like nothing was affecting them and with the apparent return of Mahado, it seems less likely they're ever going to get back together. Very unpredictable, but now I want to see how Seto would react.

ch.7 ......is saddddd......i'll be waiting for this somewhat happy ending : ) ....u a very talent writer...i've been drawn into all of your stories...

HAHAHAH!! Why is this funny? The teasor tor the new chapter had me laughing. *shakes head* Strange. I hope your not mad at me pookie, I haven't heard from you. (Okay maybe it’s just me and my constant worrying.) ink ink I have a small idea why Seto did what he did but knowing you you like to throw us readers through a loop. I love the way you portray Seto. He is always a standoffish prick but then he turns around and does something unpredictable and at time terribly romantic. Its great, it makes me laugh. (With joy.)

YaY! You updated so fast, I love ya! U updated today which is my graduation date! Yay! I'm so happy! Anyhoo, I knew that guy Mahad is gonna be a remsemblance of Yami's Black Magician cuz of the name. Did Yami really cheat on Seth?! That's really hard to believe...I hope not. Poor Yami and Seto, they misse eac each other but could not act upon their need. You REALLY MUST UPDATE ASAP!! You're so kool, I'm serious. I absolutely adore you! No one writes like you! You're my #1 fave author!

Hey Cica! Finally, I've been a real naughty fangirl haven't I? But like I've said before, I just moved and may be getting a job soon we'll see. Before I get into any of that, whoa. I just got caught up with the story and whoa. This IS my fave SetoxYami pairing. It's just so awesome. It’s great. Blah blah terrific yakky yakky yak masterpiece, etc. You know, I could say all those words but haven’t you heard them all before? Same with Seto’s and Yami’s relationship, just delicious with all the love, hate and sex. You found a formula that works, really works, pat yourself on the back and if you give me your address I’ll come down and do it for you… with a paddle. ;p