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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods, what a roller coaster!! I mean, just this chapter. Wow, it was long. That drink sounded kinda good (shush, I'm weird that way). I'd have loved to have seen the ass-reaming Bakura got (no, just the yelling, really. No, honest). I can just see the mushroom cloud if Yami ever sees that interview! Dayum, talk about bitchfest. Although, the drunken phone call was kinda funny. Since for some reason, I keep identifying with Seto (post break-up!), I hope this story has a good, if not flat out happy, ending. Bakura driving has just become my new nightmare *smirks*. *giggles* Abiss... like that. *sings* Mahad is creeepy... Those flashbacks are getting kinda scary too!
Okay, this is soooo much of a disjointed review. I'm sorry abouat. at.
Ohhhhhh Pleeeeeease update soon! Now I'm all like (whoa, valley girl moment) all worried about Seto. Fantastic as usual, Shakster!
KB
Okay, this is soooo much of a disjointed review. I'm sorry abouat. at.
Ohhhhhh Pleeeeeease update soon! Now I'm all like (whoa, valley girl moment) all worried about Seto. Fantastic as usual, Shakster!
KB
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O What was Bakura thinking, giving Yami that drink? It makes me think he knows something. And Seto, what's wrong?! I'll forgive him for not thinking too clearly, but he shouldn't wish for a tumor, especially with all these things happening. Argh! What's going on with Yami?! And Mahad? Bakura knows more than he's letting on!
Great story. Makes me really want to see what happens next.
Great story. Makes me really want to see what happens next.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome as always shakster! that club sounds like the kind of place i would go to... and the dressing room scene! that was brilliant! i would have never thought of that (that'compcompliment to u, by the way, considering i think that im the one who comes up with the best ideas in the world) ^_^ cant wait for the next chapter!
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is soooo great! I really like the end :) I hope next chapter will be as long as this one! continue with this excellent story.
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! Yami, what have you done?!?!
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I just caught up on what's been going on in this wonderful world you've created. I love how what happened in Yami's past is re-occurring in his future. This story is truly captivating and I can't wait to read more!
Tanya~
PS - drunken phone calls really do stab you right in the heart. Poor Seto. Give him a hug from me!
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, I just caught up on what's been going on in this wonderful world you've created. I love how what happened in Yami's past is re-occurring in his future. This story is truly captivating and I can't wait to read more!
Tanya~
PS - drunken phone calls really do stab you right in the heart. Poor Seto. Give him a hug from me!
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June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay for long chapters!
Is it odd that I absolutely LOVE all the jealousy and possessiveness? I think I'd kind of like to see something happen between Seto and Seig. Not necessarily a hook up, just something to make Yami go crazy with jealousy. But poor Seto, he's gotta do something to get back at Yami. ^O^ Can't wait to see how Yuugi's phone call to Mokuba goes. And also can't wait to find out why Mahad is in Yami's bed. o_O
Is it odd that I absolutely LOVE all the jealousy and possessiveness? I think I'd kind of like to see something happen between Seto and Seig. Not necessarily a hook up, just something to make Yami go crazy with jealousy. But poor Seto, he's gotta do something to get back at Yami. ^O^ Can't wait to see how Yuugi's phone call to Mokuba goes. And also can't wait to find out why Mahad is in Yami's bed. o_O
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHh the plot thickens. i wonder did Yami sleep with Mahad or was it just a druken lets take off our clothes thing?
And Seto with the nose bleeding, maybe it is just stress?
Umm..and well idk, but this story is roX and i enjoyed this chapter very much.
The drunken phone call was funny as hell!!
And Seto with the nose bleeding, maybe it is just stress?
Umm..and well idk, but this story is roX and i enjoyed this chapter very much.
The drunken phone call was funny as hell!!
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Babe--
You always manage to twist it up, fuck it up and I love every minute of it. I love the visual image of Yami in tight silver pants and black mesh shirt. wowza. And Mahad, I am telling you, he really should fuck Yami and I hope he did. Although I do feel bad for Seto, of course he did create the mess he's wallowing in now.
Love your flashback dressing room sex, heh. fucking amongst all those mirrors too, hee hee.
great job as always--
much love--
cve
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June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yup, I'm at the end of my rope. You can't blame me, how many reviews have I given you? 100? 200? 500? This story... this story is so emotional, crap, its entrancing. Captivating. Yeah calling people cum slut and bitch is award winning but it really is. I thought this wasn't going to be as good as Rivals with benefits but it is. This is like the Lord of the Ring trilogy. Just gets better and better with every sequel. I don't know how you do it but you do. Man I am so envious. If I only had half your drive I'd be set. Man I love you Shakirah, my Mistress.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
if u dont update i might to kill u i love the story mostly becaz im phyco. i use to think i knew what a love hate relationship was but u proved me wrong this is a really good story and im a drama fend so great work and i will kill u if u dont up date