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by Shakirah

person Horizont
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Shakster!

This was, imo, the most sometime-ish chapter ever... and I do like that word, it's great. It's a pity you can't properly translate it into German, 'cause it describes my brother perfectly...
Neway, Seto and Yami get more and more crazy and I love reading "Possession" while they do... it's fun, really. I like that mixture of hate and love they share. Do you know that feeling-clock? It has love on 12 and guess where hate is... yeah, right, it's 0...

I'm looking forward to part 4!
Horizont
person AlesserBeing
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was...intense...lol, again i'd love to point out some of my fave lines..but it would take too long.^^
Mokuba's so cute *grins* & i can't wait to see more flashbacks..that next chappie's sure gonna be a fun ride lol
::sighs:: i love Joey *shakes head*
Thanxies for this great new chappie! *gives Shakster some of her cherries* ;D
Ja!
~Alesser
p.s..thanks for putting hot chocolate on the long list of foods i can never look at w/o giggling again..ha
person Blue
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I didn't review last time! Forgive me!!

I absolutely loved this chapter, especially Seto's comments on Jou (i.e. the dog/canvas remark and the gene pool bit). It was great, all over the place - yes, but great.

Thanks so much for all your great work. I love it so much my joy is palpable!

~Blue September~
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are awesome.

Seriously.

The first one got my attention, the second one got me hooked, and this one leaves me waiting for a fix.

I've also got a new appreciation for Yami... congrats on work well done!!

Tanya~
person Kat
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO fantastic chapter!! Damn, those two are in serious need of hug-me jackets.... but they'd probably try and use those as sex toys. *blinks sni snickers* Might be fun. I have to admit, I love their fights. They're just so fucking schizo that they're fun. When they say that it's over I get worried. When they start violently screwing each other I breathe a sigh of relief. Ha, and people think they're screwed up!

The teaser with Joey's stunt is just hysterical! Gotta love the fact that the puppy can find an angle anywhere!
person DirtyD
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOL Joey's blackmailing Kaiba! Yet again your jerking us around (^_^) and not giving us a straight and narrow path. I'm so lost all the deities in the world couldn't help me. *sigh* This is the most depressing part about reading your stories, waiting again until the next chapter. But on another note, hot chocolate? How did they make it? Perhaps with fudge ice cream? ^_^
person aniron legolas
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Another great chapter. You never fail to deliver them. Although I'm confused about their relationship, I hope that everything works out for the best. Please update soon!

AL
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I fou found that I can never access aff.net in the evenings, it's always busy. And I always try to review at night. So I'm trying this in the morning. Wow. French maid smut. So fucking hot. You know, I bought several of those "friction" gay erotica books you suggested. I can see where you got your dirty talk dialogue. Scorching. I'll help feed your fanart fetish. I have probably over a thousand KaiYami pics saved up on my laptop. Can't wait to see what happens at the news conference. Love your dirty talk sex, love your RP smut, love your stories, and of course you too.

take care hon--

cve

person AlesserBeing
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, Yami's so cute in the morning...
Fuck that chapter was hot..gave me many o' fanart ideas..too bad i can't draw..hmm..::shrugs:: ah well, & it's not my fault i have a thing for bishies in maid outfits! fanfiction/art made me this way!^^ Loved the lil' dream/memory, too..makes me want more ::sighs:n'tn't wait for the next chappie! We heart you, Shakie! lol ;X

~Alesser*Being~

:sighs: Damn..& i kinda missed that cock ring, too..^__^ ain't I a sadistic lil' fucker..
person YamiLisa
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Shakster? Me scrolling past a lemon? Moi?? Oh yeah, that would be the day! I don’t like crossdressing. But I do like role playing. So it was fun. It was super!!
I keep finding the mood swings very weird. “I hate you. No, I love you. Fuck off. Come here.” Do they love each other or do they hate each other now? I think they love each other. That whole revelation Kaiba made there at the ending must be a prove of that. I’m a hairsplitter, I know. Don’t bother about it.