rate_review Reviews

Hi!

Wow, that was... well, the closest to sap and fluff this story will ever come, I guess. ^^;; It was really sweet, all that hugging and kissing and insulting... yeah, well. Whatever.
I still don't get why Seto hab his coming-out, I just don't get it.
Update soon? Please? ^_^x

Horizont

"if I recall correctly you nearly tripped on your pants to get on the bed" - LOL! Looks like Kaiba suffers from what I like to call TBS - (teenage boy syndrome). This chapter was great, really put me in the mood for a creamsicle ;) This weekend? Really? You go, girl!

wow, Shakster, you're writing is awesome, and this is the worst soap opera relationship ever! ^^;; I like this story better than RWB because of the toned down relationship. (but i'll be scared cuz you say it's going to get bad. :P ^^;;) i like how you skipped some of the sex scenes that would be repeated, such as the creamsicle scene, and made that EXTREMELY HOT french maid scene. ^^ yes, i like that a lot. XD (i think it gets old if you put multiple sex scenes every chapter, and by skipping some, it would make the other ones better, but that's just my opinion.)

i like Seto's sarcasm in this chapter! especially the shit cnt ant and everything he said while talking to Joey. ^__^ you're brilliant! i hope you can write more soon!

~Moonlitspire

Well, the creamsicle came back...but not in the kinky way we were all hoping for. XD

Great chapter four!! *huggles* I love your stuff.

Shakster, you are a writing machine! Wow, you update so fast. Not that I’m complaining of course.
I really thought they would end it this time. But then later they said they belong to each other for ever. It’s really confusing, but that’s just what makes it so interesting and what keeps me reading it. I’m really curious where you’re gonna take this.

Hey,

Another great chapter, especially the ending, I love the way they
mark their territory! ^_^
Curious about the next chapter and what Seto/Yami will do next.
Just love this story!

yamislove

*squeals in delight* YEAH!! a new sequel!! did i mention how much i luv u? but not like that <_< >_> i can't believe that seto came out!! that was...actually very ingenious on ur part, though i still havent figured out why u did it. but u will tell us, ur faithful fans, right? *puts on best puppy dog face* c'mon, u can't resist the face! hehe, sry im high on coke right now...anywayz, awesomeness as usual, and plenty of pain and abuse, just like i like it. ^_^ im perverted too, so ur not alone. ^_^ keep up the good work, and update soon please! update beauty soon too please! *does the face again* i can't get enough of joey/tristan!

i almost forgot! i have a song idea! i don't know if u will want to use it in ur story or not but here it is anyway. I Hate Everything About You by Three Days Grace. I was listening to it while i was reading part of ur story and it just kinda seemed to fit. there's my idea! ur biggest fan has to leave now to go read those chapters all over again!

Wow that was certainly a roller-coaster chapter. Up/down, love/hate over and over with them. Even in ancient times it seems. And having them bumping uglies, very sexy smutty as always. You know I always want my beloved pairing to be happy together. You just like to torture them a lot while they're screwing each other. I'm glad you're okay from your accident. Dogs and cars are replaceable, you aren't.

take care hon--

cve

*snickers* Lifetime passes to KaibaCorp...guess Joey is going to think ahead next chapter.

Great work again! Wow, those two have some serious issues...seriously.