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June 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know generally I'd be begginr a r a happy ending, but these two... The way they are... It just wouldn't seem right. But I do want them to be happy. The flashbacks and sudden insight all make the story very intriguing, especially the little snippet preview at the end. Now I can't wait to see what will happen next because Yami and Seto are so right and wrong together.
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Great chapter! Seriously, as gas gooood. So now the flashbacks really make sense. Lordy, Yami got a clue. Here I was hoping this would really change things in their relationship. However, not in the way your teaser just said! ACK! Still, I can't wait for the next update. This has been such a damned fun ride! Okay, some sort of twisted, bipolar roller coaster, but hey, that's what makes it fun!
Kat
Kat
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June 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
Really, with that pink haired guy, for a sceon I thought that seto really had another boyfriend and that's why he out-ed himself! I'm glad that's not the case. ^_^x Thx.
I can't wai rea read the next chaptrealreally, I can't! That teaser you alsways put at the end doesn't held matters either. BUt thanks a lot for your email! ^.^x I stark to think that this is going to have a bad ending, and I think I'd like that. ^^;;
Neway, you're doing a great job, keep it up!
Horizont
Really, with that pink haired guy, for a sceon I thought that seto really had another boyfriend and that's why he out-ed himself! I'm glad that's not the case. ^_^x Thx.
I can't wai rea read the next chaptrealreally, I can't! That teaser you alsways put at the end doesn't held matters either. BUt thanks a lot for your email! ^.^x I stark to think that this is going to have a bad ending, and I think I'd like that. ^^;;
Neway, you're doing a great job, keep it up!
Horizont
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just quickly want to say I love your story.
Its in my top 5. Its number 3. Your great!!!
Kris
Its in my top 5. Its number 3. Your great!!!
Kris
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June 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI,
Anothe great chapter my dear, Love how Seto suprise Yami in the shower
and just took him on the floor. He so naughty! gotta love him! ^_~
Can't wait for your next chapter.
Take care,
yamislove
Anothe great chapter my dear, Love how Seto suprise Yami in the shower
and just took him on the floor. He so naughty! gotta love him! ^_~
Can't wait for your next chapter.
Take care,
yamislove
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I went and bought orange cream-sicles the other day because of your story. And you know what, the only ones I could find had orange SHERBERT as the topcoat now. So t're 're too smushy to stick anywhere tight. Not that I was planning to.
Sweet, sappy up/down, funny smut. Love it hon and you too. I wish you would always write like this. But I guess that's mine and Aniron's job to write KaiYami sweet fluffy smut.
take care my dear--
cve
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June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, another great chapter! And my god, that name calling. Asscunt? Ballwasher? Penis fuck?? How the hell do you make them up? Hey, but it was funny. There bout in the bedroom, how Yami had lured him into saying yes when he asked he could go with him. Simply hilarious! And then when they got kinky in the ge rge room with Ryou and Yugi in the room. Ehe, don’t we all envy them, eh?
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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo fantastic chapter! The parallel between Atemu's trip and Seto's trip... love it! Lordy, I will never look at a cream-sicle the same way again! I cracked up when I was reading that. Actually, I damn near applauded! Poor Ryou... not the "education" he wanted out of life. *smirks* The teaser for the next chapter sounds great! I keep expecting Yami's eyes to turn green with all the jealousy he's got running through his vein
Great work, as always!
KB
Great work, as always!
KB
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl, make up your friggin' mind. If you don't even know what your doing how can the rest of us understand what's happening? As always, not only with the story but Yami and Seto still don't know what they want either. My god, it’s like all of a sudden their body released a flood of estrogen overnight. Your right, the sex was funny. Go Seto, go! It's nice to see Joey in character, poor brainless sweetheart. So bitch, where's the beef? You going to cook me up a nice fat one aren't you? Where in the hell is this review going? It's official, you fucked up my mind Mistress cock-a-doodle-doo.
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June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoo! Seig is making an appearance! You're damn good at spinning out a smutty plot-non-plot, am looking forward our our next update!