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Damn! I've gotta say dat was d best Seto/Yami story i've read!! And the smut......oh man *sighs n drools* And d story ws pretty good too ^_~ Seriously, it ws one of d few fanfics where I read the storyline accompanying d smut n ALL of your rather *ahem* looooooong chapters n found myself wishin they were longer ^_^ Please continue writing..waiting for your next stories..if possoble, could you let me knw wen u update? My email id is ace_f_spades@yahoo.com...tc

I've read this entire storyline a total of three times now, I think it's finally time I left a review. (sorry, I'm lazy) I just can't find the right words. Amazing. Incredible. Beautiful. Absolutely one of the most wonderful fics I've ever read. I'm NOT usually into anything darkish and/or abusive but the way you wrote this, it was just addicting. I CRIED when they broke up in the last part. I'm not an overly emotional person, but I bawled when you were describing how they felt without each other. I thought the way you ended it was just PERFECT. The whole thing is just soo...intense. You did an amazing job and I just felt I had to give you the proper credit. Oh, and the smut was SOOOOO HOTT!!! Absolutely top notch job on the lemons. Thank you for writing this amazing story!

AWESOME STORY!

Thank you for writing this fic! Yeah, I think I'm going to be reading a lot of your stuff, except for the T/J ones, I can't handle those, because I just don't like the pairing. They work, but... yeah. Each to their own. Anyway, I'm getting sidetracked. You're making me want to step out of my S/J realm and write one of these! I'm glad that Yami and Seto got a... sort of happy ending. See, that's what happens when you base a relationship off sex. *nod* Loved it!

Wow.. Absolutly Amazing! I Love It!!! The ending Was Awesome! Beautiful!!!

Wow, that was the BEST ending ^^
I admitt i was one of the HIGHLY disturbed people when reading the second part of this series, but im glad i finished it. I really loved this story^^

And oh my fucking RA was that epiloge HOT *drool* XD

Great stuff!!

At the beginning this was good. Toward the middle it became a little unrealistic and annoying. But at the end, it went back to being good smut. *shrugs* I'll give it a 7.

By the fucking gods! Fuckfuckfuck. This was the most amazing thing I've ever read, in terms of everything. Holy fucking shit, I WAS CRYING!!! I do not cry! When Yami and Seto were making up... it was just so beautiful, I honestly had tears in my eyes. This was one of the most powerful pieces I've ever read. You have a way with words... a way of making them flow together so that everything seems to come naturally. It all just made sense... the ending was perfect, it was all so wonderful... *shakes head* I was afraid to finish reading it, because I didn't know what would happen... and I couldn't decide what I wanted to happen.

The single negative thing I have to say is that you need to reread it a little... it might have been the uploading, but there are a few mistakes in spelling and grammar and letter repetition... [There's a bit that says 'Yamdickdick'...] Otherwise, a huge fucking BRAVO and I fucking love it. From the videotape to the DVD, it was fucking awesome.

Absolutely amazing!! I have enjoyed every single page of your story and all the laughs you have integrated... You are an incredible writer!! Keep that lemony goodness coming...

(On to reading the next story of yours now...;-) )

So hot!!! I loved it all those lovely lemons, and actual story, weill wonders never siece! I loved it!