rate_review Reviews

Gods, that was absolutely beautiful! The sentiment at the end was really eloquently put! And I think believable on Kaiba's part! He has a way with words...but seriously, I think a relationship needs that 'hot' and 'cold' element; otherwise, it becomes predictable and eventually resentful...Beautiful story, even if it was a PWP! ^^

This is amazing...absolutly beautiful for your first lemon...*bows*

*fans self* Damn, that was truely an amazing piece of work! I simply adore Kaiba x Jounouchi fics, and there are not many out there which are worth my time in reviewing, but this was something else. I hope to see more of your work! PS - you reviewed my fic "Dark Horse" didn't you? Thank you for your praise! I have updated it since then, also. Maybe you'd like to check it out ^^ Keep up the awesome work!

I loved this, keep it up ^^;

Hn. I thought I reviewed this, but oh well. I really loved this fic. It's very different from most lemons. It's... poetic, rather than pure smut. This was VERY well written, and I can't wait for you to write some more stuff. Great job! *thumbs up*

I review cause i liked it, i liked it cause it was good, make sence ne? well that summerizes what i have to say about that! other then...ummm nice latin? mine isn't very good the language is difficult to learn! @.@
~redragon

Unlike the people who are like, "Seto walks into Jounouchi's room and finds him jacking off to Honda pics, and then fucks Jounochi HARD up the butt until his colon pops," and THEY get five stars and I don't know WHY, YOUR lemon is actually good. I'll admit that it's too poetic (No matter how hard I ty I can't picture Jounouchi as poetic...) but it's VERY good and you worked your ass off. And I'm not being a shgsdfusdgfsgdgsd here. I WANT you to write more lemons. SO GET THE MARIKU X ISIS X MAI X JESUS X GOD X SANTA X THE VAGINA GIRLS X THAT PEDOPHILE WHO JUST GREETED YOU X DREW OVER WITH.

This was very interesting. I liked it and I hope to see more of your work ^_^

Oh my god! THat was fantc! c! The lemon, utterly hot! What was said at the end, amazing. Loved every bit of it.

wow, that was kick ass!!! :D