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May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey R! Finally got around to reading this. *Very* good! I gave it *****! (Wouldn't let me give it any more than that) :(
I know you said it was smut, but I didn't expect *this* pairing. I'm not usually into insest, but you pulled it off very well. Congrats!
S.
I know you said it was smut, but I didn't expect *this* pairing. I'm not usually into insest, but you pulled it off very well. Congrats!
S.
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Neat story. I thought it was well written, but sometimes your descriptions seemed a little /too/ detailed, and it was hard to get a visual. Just a thought for next time -- keep writing, you've got talent.
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May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this was good!
I really liked this, specially the ending...the rest was gd too hehe ^__^
Great story!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xx
I really liked this, specially the ending...the rest was gd too hehe ^__^
Great story!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xx