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for My World

by AtheneChan

person Lai
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So well done so far... On to book three...
person Terra
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO UPDATE!!!!! MADE MY DAY!!!!! Now if my kid would just stop throwing a fit at nap time.

Oh I just love the way these two are coming together. And such nices friends they have. But why do I get this feeling the hammer is about to fall?

Update soon.
person Terra
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It seems like they are getting back on line together. Good. Mai is a good friend and poor Honda, needs to be nice to himself.
Loved it, Update soon.

Terra
person Terra
schedule June 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice make up. I think perhaps an understanding has occured between those two. Update soon.
person Terra
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Never saw that one coming. Good chapter. Update soon.
person Terra
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoyed Voids and My World. You have created a very detailed picture of your characters and their personalities and problems. The humor is fantastic. Please update soon.

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