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for Alternate Uses for the Pool Table

by KCBailey

person Death over Time (not signed on)
schedule June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FF.net has suspended me 3 times, 2 times for writting songfics (I dunno why, I wrote that I didn't own them, but they said "for posting song lyrics that don't belong to you" and once for underrating something. It was a Romeo and Juliet parody, rated it the same as the Movie was, said it was underrated... go figure)

This was hot by the way!
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o__o Never has pool table sex been so hot. XD Glad I found this; I just kinda got into Malik x Otogi. Though Honda x Otogi is still my OTP. :D

Very nicely written and I loved the humour. ^^ 8/10. <3
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is "hee hee hee!" That was incredibly fun! Never read that pairing before... I think I like it. ^^ You know, most people write Malik as kinda girly, not the psycho he really is and should always be written as. Thanks for doing him right!
person Anon
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Marik is such an interesting drunk....

(suddenly becomes chibi)

Mawik and Otogi scwewed on a tabwe!!!
schedule April 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow very well written. i liked it.
person Jill
schedule March 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, thats good. Looooved it! ^__^
person anubiset
schedule January 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it. I love it. I love it. That is one pairing I want to try, but haven`t gotten up the nerve to yet. Maybe I`ll try it before I try that other one. Oh well. LOVE IT.
person PikaChan (too lazy to log in)
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now this is just TEH SEX. Malik is TEH SEX, Otogi is TEH SEX, Malik x Otogi is like... TEH SEX squared. I love you. Really. I do.

"I think blue tastes nice. I wonder what green tastes like?" Best line in the whole thing. I love it when Marik is a moron. XD
person Renee
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cackles*

That was some genius work there. You did an amazing job with the whole thing.

Although I think you could\beenbeen smuttier. xDD
person Sakata Ri Houjun
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I throughly enjoyed that. There's nothing wrong with sensless Otogi/Malik sex. In fact, that's one of my favorite pairings, only you don't shem hem much. The interruptions on Bakura and Marik were a touch distracting, but humorous. I'd like to see a follow up to find out if Malik is successful in keeping Otogi's hair down, or even if Otogi manages to top Malik.