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by Mellybean

person zatken
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, an awesome chapter for an awesome story. I love the story - a good background for the three stories that you have written.

And about character bashing....as much as I don't approve of it, I show that mostly through not bashing the characters in stories that I write. I don't demand it for other authors. However, if an author's going to character bash (Anzu, or any canon character) I'm just hoping that there is a legitimate reason for doing so. It's just too commonplace when other fanfic authors just bash for the hell of it. My motto is if you do bash, then do it with style....

In this story, Tristan has his reasons why he doesn't like Tea....what I'm hoping for is that in the end, Tristan and Anzu will at least be civil with each other (with Tristan being more civil towards Anzu, and with Anzu just acing ing the fact that Tristan's gay without being overly condescending and holier-than-thou)....and then of course Anzu goes her own way, since I don't see her presence in the other stories.

However, I am romping around in the world that you've created (and having so much giggly fun) so I am giving you full artistic license to do whatever you both so please **lol**

I love Tristan's grandma ;-D

Have a safe trip, and please update soon ;-D
person Bianca
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay, prequel time! I love anything having to do with this story line, and having a backstory is always a good idea. I enjoy reading all of your stuff, can't wait for the next installment of all of them!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Too Coolies!!! Ahhh!! Another story!! Moretry try and keep up with! I LOVE IT!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Terra
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have started off with another winner here. It is a good set up to explain some of the things you wonder about in your other stories. Good capture on the way Seto lightened up.
person Black_Butterfly (too lazy to log in)
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very very good hon ^_^ i love it already! Family's still my favorite, but this is excellent. Get the next chapter out ASAP!

PS: Looks like i'm your first reviewer...sweet
person bakurasgirl
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Anzu: HELICOPTERS ARE LIKE FRIENDSHIP!!! YEAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FRIENDSHIP!
Aten: .......my heart hurts.
Aria: *snarl*
Bakura: KILL IT!!! *stabs Anzu*
Anzu: I'M BLEEDING! WOW! I'M BEING SO FRIENDLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Marik: Even she scares me.
Seto: She scares all of us.
Miranda: *holds bottom of shirt* Continue or I'll flash Seto.
Seto: .........NOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!! CONTINUE!!!!!!!!!!!






person zatkeW
schedule March 9, 0000 at 12:00 AM
Oh, Nana's dead.... **sob** And I also feel so bad for Yami when Yugi called him his "brother..." Ay....anyw..pl..please update your stories very soon ;-D