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by Mellybean

person Black_Butterfly (i don\'t feel like logging in....)
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.....yet another chapter leaving me hanging on thee ofe of my seat. Great job hon ^^ as usual. sorry i missed ya online, I'm still without a comp, besides webtv. i'm getting it back on the 15th though! woo! and planning to move soon o_O soo much is happening. So i gotta hurry up and pay rentway so i can tell you about it! Any way, i'll be in tears if you don't continue. And looking forward to the next chapter of family ^^ Love ya!

~Amaya
person Kschur32
schedule June 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter (of course). Poor Tris with his grandmother dying. I hope he will be ok. And our first glimps of Otogi. I am liking this story a lot so far. waiting for the next chapter.
person Terra
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Take a bow my dear, very well done.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's because you should call him you moron!!!


Wowwies!! Wonderful, simply wonderful!! Oy, the background is always so coolies!! Hmm. Was Joey talking about Otogi, I wonder?? LOL!! And we *all* know how *that* turns out in the end, or is starting to anyways!!

Update soon, 'kay?

Lady Elfskye
person Kschur32
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I don't get to read for 8 days and I come back and you have started the new story already. Like it so far. LIke the chppoerride in the first chapter. THe teacher should be shot for showing up at Tristian's hoise and kissing him. Hope the vacation goes well have fun.
person Shakster
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just in case for one moment I wasn't wrapped up in the angst of Dead End Street and Family By Choice, this story has to come along... ahhhh.... poor Tristan... that LaCroix guy sounds like a slimeball to me. I don't like him. As for Seto... yes, of course he needs friends... I can't wait until he gets close Tri Tristan.
person zatken
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so that's Marc LaCroix....I love this story, and I can't wait for the next chapter.

I felt so sorry for YamiI loI love the way that you described his feelings...

Keep up the good work, and have a safe trip ;-D
person leaf zelindor
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
my oh my...this fic is going t int interesting i know it is. yay! we finally are going to get more background from the other fics!!! hehehehe you know i just love this fic series to death.....-bounces around- i really need to go to bed..it's after three am...-shifty eyes- have fun visiting the US of A! >.>....the country i love but the president i hate...-shakes head- nite! ~Leaf~
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like the turn in the story... i just hope for a somewhat happy ending :)
person Anon
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i have a quick question..who is suppose to end up with who?...it seems like trist and joey are meant to be...but your summary says the beginining of seto and trist relationship..thanks for listening