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for Midnight Madness

by SilverInferno

person Deb
schedule August 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG UPDATE!!!
Pleeeease!!!
Ryou is so kool!!! I love him! Hehe torturing Kura!
Such a surprise when it was Ryou!
Great chapter!!!
Cant wait to read more!
Much Luv
Debs xxx
person DracOnyx
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers wildly* GO RYOU! I knew that boy had it in him . . . but , wh, what a place to leave us! Update soon, please, or I'm going to be feeling as anxious as Bakura is . . .
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*in post-fic shock* why did you have to leave off there? *whines* I want more~!

as for constructive criticism, I have to say that I found the fic overall insanely funny, but the way you worded your sentences after a character spoke might lead some people into confusion. Really, that's my only complaint aside from where you chose to stop in you fifth chapter. <.<

Madame Ruby
person KlebKat
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate you. I hate you with a passion and you are so gonna write more (I hope).

I don't like Yami/Haikari parings, but I'm still reading. I was debating as to who it could be Monday (this is tuesday) and was nearly driven insane just like Bakura.

I knew it was Ryou for sure after 10 mins of debating...but I was still hoping for Evil Bakura/Seto. Oh well. Write on!

Ai, KlebKat
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kewlness!!! You never would have thought Ryou, of all people, would be the one!!!
person hell's lil kitty
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hell's lil kitty: AAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!! WHY, WHY, WHY!!!!???? EVIL! EVIL CLIFHANGER!!!!! AAAAHHHHH!!!!!
angel's lil kitty: *whacks hell over the head* i'm so sorry! hell gets like that when there are clifhangers. (she has issues) >.>
hell: do not!
angel: do too!
hell: DO NOT!!!
angel: aaanywho, awsome and fantatic story! we both love it! but >.< we didn't like how you cut it off when we were about to find out who it was.
hell: EEEVVVIIILLL!!!!!!! MORE! MORE! MUST HAVE MOOORREE!!!! *laughs macanically*
angel: -_-' eh, what she said.
hell: MHUHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!
angel: anywho pls! update as fast as you can!! we can't wait!! ^^
person KlebKat
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just so you know, this is an awsome story but...

If it's Ryou, I'll kick your ass.

XP not really, bum hom hopping for a diffrent from the norm coupleing.

Ai, KlebKat
person AngelRavenDove
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Tell meeeeeee! Ryuuichi wants to know na no da! Who's Kura's mystery lova?! Hurry! Need more of Baku-chan seduction!
person Cherazz
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gaaaaahhhh!!! You're so evil!!!! But great writing! I wanna know who it is! You should be honored that I read this...I don't normally read about Bakura...I'm more of a Yami/Yugi fan. But, you have me very intrigued as to who this person is. Please update soon, I'm psychChe
person Anon
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Argh!!! *pulls hair out in frustration* Who the hell is it?!?!?! I neeeeeeed to know. I'll die if you don't finish this thing! *once again checks her list of suspects* Well, it's narrowed down to someone he's checked... someone close to him. Methinks either Ryou, Malik, Yami no Yugi, or Yami no Malik. But I can't really narrow it down from there and idrivdriving me crazy! Pleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleasepleaseplease finish this soon!