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for Ride The Crime Wave

by Aten

person Kat
schedule October 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo Otogi's turn!!

A long….
Hard…
Throbbing…
Wet…..
*blinks* What? *blinks some more* Oh yeah, keep reading...

That way I can look into his face forever.
Ooooo creeeeepy! Wait, he does have a pretty face. All that lovely long hair...

It would be all in good fun.
*laughs* At least he didn't say good, clean fun!

After I finish off Otogi, you are next.
Hmm…but how should I do it?
How would you prefer your death? Swift? Painless?
Well, I guess we’ll work that out when I am done with Otogi. Since you’ve been with me for this long, I’ll let you choose how you die, reader.
*raises hand* Can it involve Marik's rod? *cackles* Ohhhh you know I just had to say that!

You are captivated. You want to see if I actually kill Otogi.
*nods* Yup, you got that right!

“Don’t worry, my little Catch of the Day."
*laughs* going to seafood restaurants is going to be fun from now on!

OOOO 'Togi's fighting back!? Cool!! Go 'Togi!

*grins evilly* 'Togi dear, two words: Cordless Phones

“Correction…your turn!”
BANG! BANG!
WOOHOOO go Otogi!

You have all been avenge Coo Cool! Otogi: SuperBishi

Loved it! Fantastic!

Hippo Birdies!
Kat
person Kat
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I stepped in and Seto was reclined in his leather chair. Mmmm…leather.
*homer simpson-type drooling* leaaaatherrrrr
*cackles*

Good God, girl. What can I say???

Damn, Oh my god, son of a bitch! Shiiiit, that was goood!

*g* I think that this is my favorite chapter! Can't wait to see the next one.

Kat
person Kat
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
color me freaked! Damn, best death scene yet! Oooo Otogi next? Lovely eyes on the dresser?? *shudders* great, still got that visual floating t myt my head. Dang!

Can't wait to see what he's got up his, umm... sleeve, ahem, for 'Togi.

Kat
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! Whatta lemon!!!!!!!!!!! Hot and steamy!! But poor Mako!!!


Lady Elfskye
person Terra
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice pairing but so sad. I think Makeds eds a permanent lover. Let's see what I can do about that?? LOL It was so Mako though but a water bed sucks to sleep on they're cold! Even with the heater for them up.
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: MMMMMMMMM...hot.
DD: Poor Mako. That was a total wrong choice.
YD: *throws Joey on Mako* Here you go!
DD: *throws Tris on Mako* The more the merrier!!