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for Twelve signs

by Fel5

person smalvina
schedule March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked your story
person leaf zelindor
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
-fofl- poor Mokie! -bounces around- that was most intersting yes yes yes it was ~Leaf~
person Kat
schedule May 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOO Bitchin' ending! The best! *howls* I love the last two parts. Perfect! You couldn't have ended this better. Amazingly enough, even if you'd put a lemon in. (I may have to turn in my membership to Hentai Fairies anonymous for saying that...)

I can't wait to see what story you come up with next!

KB
person Kat
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo great chapter! Kaiba's really ng ing it, ain't he?? *EG* I love that part best! Like the whole story about how Jou found out about his sister and Honda. Poor Mokuba, always being in the wrong place at the wrong time. Sucks to be him somedays. I snickered at his laughing at Seto. It's not often that he does thnd ind it's always so much fun when he does!

Can't wait for the next chapter!! I'm gonna be so bummed when this ends.

KB
person Kat
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooooo loved the Jou dunking!! *G* Loved it loved it loved it! One more chapter? *pouts* Waaaa. I just about hurt myself laughing when I imagined Jou curtseying instead of bowing.

Ohhh shiiiit, wait! A ?!?!?!?! Oh gods, in all these chapters I never _once_ considered a girl sending those notes! *sheepish grin* Hell of a cliffhanger too!

KB
person Nightmare
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good really good. It has a plot and has sunk its hooks into me so I want to know who is writing to Seto again really good
person Kat
schedule May 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* Jou yelling the "end is near". Hysterical! Lordy, but my jaw dropped when Seto apologized so prettily! These chapters just get better and better. One thing though, I'd love to have seen an illustration of Seto's reflection in that window... *smirks*

Mokuba cannonballs, perfect!

Can't wait for the next chapter!!

KB
person thinkin
schedule May 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is an interesting story, i really want to see what happens next! update soon please!
person Kat
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*falls over laughing* Ooooo he kissed the wrong guy! I KNEW it! *howls louder* Loved this chapter! Just when I think I've figured out who it is, I end up doubting myself. I can't wait to see what the next chapter is going to be like.

KB
person rain
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Anzu wants to be a dancer and in both the manga and the anime, she is shown to be very good at it. You ruined a story that might have been good with stupid, senseless bashing.