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May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO WONDER THIS FICTION SEEMED SO FAMILIAR! XDDD -Amused much.-
Lovely work, Pad-Chan. Hope to see more in later chapters! Go Baku!!
Lovely work, Pad-Chan. Hope to see more in later chapters! Go Baku!!
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May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^^ that so rocked! one suggestion, try to space your use of "other" and "said" a bit...*hides behind a rock...pls dont hurt me, that fic started out great