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February 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was fucking great! Characteristics were great and the angst was grade A. Will there be more?
schedule
February 9, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Reviewing Chapter 1:
Only you could make Jou/Mai readable. *grins* Good chapter, and go you for the Sade reference! *dances* Anyway, nice chapter, looks to be an interesting little plot bunny that you're feeding. *whispers* Miracle Grow, Miracle Grow... Ahem. Anyway, loving Jou, loving Mai, and I'm sure in the next chapter I'm going to love Seto. Maybe...Hm...
~Jane
P.S. - I would never make a deal with Kaiba. Jou should be kicked. Just kidding. Good stuff. *thumbs up*
Only you could make Jou/Mai readable. *grins* Good chapter, and go you for the Sade reference! *dances* Anyway, nice chapter, looks to be an interesting little plot bunny that you're feeding. *whispers* Miracle Grow, Miracle Grow... Ahem. Anyway, loving Jou, loving Mai, and I'm sure in the next chapter I'm going to love Seto. Maybe...Hm...
~Jane
P.S. - I would never make a deal with Kaiba. Jou should be kicked. Just kidding. Good stuff. *thumbs up*