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I loved the story, but please please write more. Are they going to get back together. Or does Kaiba have to be alone, you are a very good writer but can you please write a couple of more chapters? Hope you keep writing.

NO! What an ending! You better continue this!

LOL, nice job anyway,

Keep on Writin'
Elaya

Kaiba's quite possessive. o.O

Great story! I am now addicted to this little saga and I want to see what happens next. You've got good grammar and style, as well as flow. I like how Seto wasn't just alddenddenly 'oh I love you so much!' like in some fics. It's realistic, for the most part. Otogi seems a little out of character, but when you need to add an evil streak to characters, that's what you do.

NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Please tell me your going to update this tomorrow? I started to cry at this last chapter. Please don't ruin this story. T_T don't make me beg.

Wow... I love this story so much! Thou wis wish Seto weren't so mean to Jou; after all, the pguy\guy's just trying to bee. e. But I suppose that's how Seto is; if you were writing him any other way, I'd have to jump down your throat for OOC.

I've been reading this for a couple of days, wanted to finish it before I reviewed. I felt so bad for Jou when he gave up the Red-Eyes only to have Seto be such a jerk to him right after. And I must say, though drunkenness isn't my favorite precipitant to a lemon scene, it did seem oddly appropriate for this fic. The lemon felt like a whirlwind, though... am I the only one that was scrolling back up and saying, "Now, when did Seto stop being fully clothed?" Of course, that could be the lack of caffeine in my blood right now...

Anyway, once the next chapter's up, you can expect another review from me. See ya!

This is such a great story, you ARE going to write more right?

I read this before it was deleted on ff.net an i really like it! can't wait for you to put it all up and the next chapter.

Hi I read this fic at that other site ( i won't say who but we all know *smirks*) any ways I'm glad that i found it here and i can't wait till you post up to the most recent chapter b4 it got deleted. I think this is the best s/j story in a long time i hope you update soon.

Ja ne!!!

^&^ YAH! YOU BROUGHT IT HERE!! SO WHEN ARE YOU GOING TO GET TO WHERE YOU LEFT OFF *baby eyes* ^^ that caps means excitement. Yah, I know, FF.net is being ASSes, but atleast they didn't DELETE your account!

I just wanted to say how happy I am that this is here. I almost died when I went to look it up at FF.net and found out it isn't there any more! I'm so happy you're still going. Can't wait till you finally get to where you left off there! *dreamy look* such a wonderful story...Although I just realized that I don't know where you left off... wel well. -__-; I'm rambling. Goodbye...