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for An Innocent Joke?

by freewater

person Anvanimaserke
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! such a good fic!!! it was amazing!!! so sad, and sweet, and just EVERYTHING about it was good!! I luv this pairing *huggles pairing* and they way you wrote this was so good!! they were both in character so well!! and the story idea was great!!! and dont worry, you lemons are really good!!! I like them ^^ but if you would like some tips i would be happy to meet you on a chat sometime and give you some advice ^^ if you want to, e-mail me, although i dont think your lemons need improvement. *screams* *kills you* THAT WAS MEAN!!! when you put 'the end' and it wasnt the end!!! I had a heart attack, you just lucky seth was was there to revive me or you wouldnt be getting this really long review!! and he had to revive me again atfter i died of a heart attack when Jou pulled the triger on the gun!!!!!! geez, this is such a good suspensful fic!!!! I really liked the part where they were at the club, it was really cool ^^ dunno why. but i luved it ^^ and all the angst ^^ I almost cryed it was so sad!!! especially when Jou's puppy got ripped!!! poor him!! ooo, or when seto saw Jou throw the puppy to anzu!!! ;_;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so glad it all turned out good so far ^^ that is if Yami dosnt send Seto to the shadow relm 0.o LOL PLEASE!!!!!! *sacrafises several duel monsters in hopes of sumoning a new chapter* PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person DBZVelena
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I got so angry over the suiside thing, but now they're back together so everything will be fine, and Yugi and Yami will just have to deal with the fact that Jou and Kaiba are together now!
Loved this loads!
person Mallory
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I followed this from ff.net and you just HAVE to write more this is sooo good, and I love all the twists please write more
person Yukiko
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your doing great with the story, i really enjoy reading it but don't stop. Please write a couple more chapters i would really like to know what Jou's friends do when they find out that he is back with Kaiba and what ever happended to Otogi and Honda? Are they dating or something. Please Please Please wrote more.
person Yukiko
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your doing great with the story, i really enjoy reading it but don't stop. Please write a couple more chapters i would really like to know what Jou's friends do when they find out that he is back with Kaiba and what ever happended to Otogi and Honda? Are they dating or something. Please Please Please write more.
person Anon
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
One word. AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!
Two more words. HOW CUTE!

Nice way how you did the whole angst thing with the 'Take the puppy already!' AND the whole bathroom scene!

I <3 Kaiba/Jou!

Keep on Writin'
Reviewer #34321
person DBZVelena
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really hope they'll get back together I love them so much together!
Write more soon!
person yaoigoddess
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!! Their back together! You have to update soon. I really need to read more of this story. It is the best Seto/Jou story I've ever read (and I'm not just saying that) I can't wait till you add another chapter. You are an awesome writer. Please update soon, and until you do, I'll be reading your other fics.
person MomOfFluffyAndFluffier
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww...poor Seto, hope he can win back Jou's trust and his heart....please continue
person DBZVelena
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story.
I hope jou will wake up and explain to everybody what happened.
And then maybe they'll understand that Seto fell in love and that the moment that happened it stopped to be a joke and started to be something diffrent.
post the rest soon ok?