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June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Comment on your having Katsuya be his first name...you got that one right. Jounouchi is his last name--good guess! ^ ^ And good story so far...I'm gonna go back to reading it now...
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March 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 23 was so in character!!! That part where Jou was talking to Shizuka was so much like the show!!! I have never seen more in-charrie-ness in a fic except that for that moment
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November 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GOSH!!!!!!!!!! This has to be the best j/s story i have ever read!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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September 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm not finished reading it all yet, but I just had to say that the way you write is outstanding. And bakura throwing the knive gave me goosbumps
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok im not even done with chapter 2 yet but i HAD to put a little comment thingy.
Katsuya is his LAST name and Jounuichi is his FIRST. and since they do use last names
as the way to well...refer someone (im Japan), Kaiba should have called him JOUNUICHI when he wanted
to see if Jou would get pissed. it should be Mr. KATSUYA....not Jounuichi. im sorry im not flaming or
anything, it's just that whole thing pissed me off. >_< i dont blame you or anything either.
i guess i can understand how that would be confusing...but whatever. i do like the fic so far :3
it's just the first name, last name thing...god i wanted to eat my monitor i was so frustrated -_-U
Katsuya is his LAST name and Jounuichi is his FIRST. and since they do use last names
as the way to well...refer someone (im Japan), Kaiba should have called him JOUNUICHI when he wanted
to see if Jou would get pissed. it should be Mr. KATSUYA....not Jounuichi. im sorry im not flaming or
anything, it's just that whole thing pissed me off. >_< i dont blame you or anything either.
i guess i can understand how that would be confusing...but whatever. i do like the fic so far :3
it's just the first name, last name thing...god i wanted to eat my monitor i was so frustrated -_-U
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July 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS! Do you like mpregs? if so please write one as a sequal to this and e-mail me if you do so i can read it and review it!
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July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG this is FUCKING COOL!! You need to write a sequel to this. Where His father comes out of jail and confronts the two..unless he's already done that...-_- ^_^ Keep up the great work!
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July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe. Handcuffs and frilly pink dresses. You amuse me.
I wonder... Are you making another fic like this? I'm sure it'd be completely enjoyable.
I made Seto/Jou fics (but in them I used all the English names... I notice how however, used Tea's English name. Her Japanese name is Anzu), but they aren't lemony fresh. Er, lemons. >_~;;! They're kind of suggestive and SORTA lemons, but never are because that kinda stuff I'm really shy about.
So glad it's summer. I love it... So nice out, even at night, and you can stay up 'til like, one in the morning.
Anyway... Next time (this is a suggestion only) use ALL the Japanese names.
I'll even write the obvious ones down for the kiddies who get confused at the Japa-English crossovers.
Seto Kaiba: Same thing.
Katsuya Jounouchi: Joey Wheeler
Yugi Motou: Same, far as I know.
Ryou Bakura: Same.
Otogi: Duke Devlin (Or is it Dublin?) (Called "Drake" by some fangirls).
Hiroto Honda: Tristan Taylor.
Anzu Mazaki: Tea Gardner.
Mai Kujaku: Mai Valentine.
Pegasus J. Crawford: Maximillion Pegasus.
Shizuka Jounouchi: Serenity Wheeler.
I wonder... Are you making another fic like this? I'm sure it'd be completely enjoyable.
I made Seto/Jou fics (but in them I used all the English names... I notice how however, used Tea's English name. Her Japanese name is Anzu), but they aren't lemony fresh. Er, lemons. >_~;;! They're kind of suggestive and SORTA lemons, but never are because that kinda stuff I'm really shy about.
So glad it's summer. I love it... So nice out, even at night, and you can stay up 'til like, one in the morning.
Anyway... Next time (this is a suggestion only) use ALL the Japanese names.
I'll even write the obvious ones down for the kiddies who get confused at the Japa-English crossovers.
Seto Kaiba: Same thing.
Katsuya Jounouchi: Joey Wheeler
Yugi Motou: Same, far as I know.
Ryou Bakura: Same.
Otogi: Duke Devlin (Or is it Dublin?) (Called "Drake" by some fangirls).
Hiroto Honda: Tristan Taylor.
Anzu Mazaki: Tea Gardner.
Mai Kujaku: Mai Valentine.
Pegasus J. Crawford: Maximillion Pegasus.
Shizuka Jounouchi: Serenity Wheeler.
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Are you kidding?!?! THIS. IS. THE. BESSSSSTTTT!!
Everytime - Britney Spears
I Believe In You - Amanda Marshall
Look Through My Eyes - Phil Collins
I'm pretty sure those are all the songs I thought would go well with this fic.
In the words of Bob (From Weebl and Bob) : -^^- SOOO CUTE!
Everytime - Britney Spears
I Believe In You - Amanda Marshall
Look Through My Eyes - Phil Collins
I'm pretty sure those are all the songs I thought would go well with this fic.
In the words of Bob (From Weebl and Bob) : -^^- SOOO CUTE!
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June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
...*Frowning* Did I mention I kill people who make me or my loved ones unhappy, just by *wishing* it?
Yes, my real name is Sadako Yamamura. You will regret it if this story doesn't have a happy ending.
*Truly* regret it.
Yes, my real name is Sadako Yamamura. You will regret it if this story doesn't have a happy ending.
*Truly* regret it.