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by Shakirah

schedule July 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again, damn good! I kinda liked Possession better but Seth's atttitude is so hot...
person Iyasu
schedule July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I was really believing that Seth was going to kill Atemu, and so when it got close to the end, I was like, "O_O!! What!?" That rocked, it was so sexy, and hot, and yummy!
person setosgirl (not signed in)
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I really though all was as it seemed until almost he end. ^_^ Bravo!
person Kalena
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! That was awesome!!!!!!!! :D I actually thought that Seth was really bad!!!! lol. That game was great and well thought of. You totally reeled me in. Very hot! :)
person AngryMob
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARrrrr YArrR!, I will havur hur head for making The All Powerful Yami uke!, The deepest circle of hell is reserved for heretics and pond scum like you!.

person Sakura Haursame
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was great! I actually thought Yami and Seth's role-play was actualy what was happening! Very well witten... I can't wait to read other pairings from you. (I've already read Lust, Longing and a Videotape, Rivals with Benefits, and Possession)
person Renee
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wooo! Yami and Seto sure do like their roleplaying...;)
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Oh, holy hell! That was HOT!
DD: Most definately!!
YD: How the hell did we miss this?
DD: I have no idea...but it was SOOOOOOO good!!
YD: Hats off to you, doll!
person AlesserBeing
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
By Ra, i think i love you.
lmao, i LoVeD this fic! (especially the spanking..i'm such a hentai -_-;;)
Thanxies, Can't wait for the sequel to 'Rivals' and the next chappie of 'Beauty'!^^

Ja ne,
~Alesser*Being~
person Moonlitspire
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol, another 'twist' if you can call it that. yes, i think you're the first person (that i know of) to make yami and seto hate AND love each other so intensely at the same time and make it all into one big RPing. it's quite original, to say the least. although i don't quite like it when theyre trying to (even pretend to) kill each other, i think it makes the story much...hotter! ^__^ plus the ending was sweet. good job, shakster! of course, im sad to hear that you won't be writing anymore stories of this pairing, but definately i'll be looking forward to the sequel of RWB.

~Moonlitspire