rate_review Reviews

Hey, good chapter! It was very... explanatory, sort of. At least we got some sort of background on the story. I'd still like to see more.

I also still say that this shouldn't be a Yami and Yuugi story. However, I think that in the end you should just write it however, and with whatever pairing you feel it works best. There's no point in writing it if you're not going to be satisfied with the end results. I'm sure it'll turn out fine.

~Blue September~

OMs cos comming home im so happy! my poor yugi was so upset. how'd yami go from travling world to a whore? hmmmmmmmmmmmm something to think about. love this story! awaiting next chapter. c-ya!

Very creative so please update soon.

So he's going home, that's great. I am very immpressed with this story it is indeed very.....creative. I would really like to see yami/yugi in the end.....they are my third favorite couple but this story just leads right into it. You are a very good author i must say this is good work. I can't wait to see the next chapter, i'm in total suspense here.........I simply refuse to go to sleep untile you update.....This story is just to good t aa aa cliff hanger...i need to know what happens!please hurry with nex next one!i'm begging you!......sorry....got carried away....anywayz so looking forwardthe the next chapter.


Setos

Oh wow!!! Better and better! I want the next chapter now! Great job you're doing. Truly!

Yeah! HE'S COMING HOME *party time*

I really enjoyed this chapter! It was sad, but very well written!

GREAT, great work!

Wow....so, Yami's a prostitute. Lol, I don't think I've ever read a story like that^^ I seriously hope this fanfic becomes a Yami and Yugi story. They're my favorate couple and I think they would be more interesting than a Yami and Seto fic. Yugi could try and help Yami get better, then end up getting sucked into Yami's drug and sex ridden world. ^_^;; Please update, this _is_a really good fanfic.

I'm likeing your story! 8-) YY/Y is a pairing that is done so much. Could Yugi be a customer and some else be Yami's partner? Perhaps Honda, Jou, Seto?

Or the story could stay dark, and Yami have no partner at all...

You write the story the way *you* want,ok? So far you are doing an excellent job on this one.

aspiker

Please update soon! I'm in suspense here!! I'm loving this fic!

WAIII!! This is so good! I'm hooked to another of your fics, but please, not a Yami/Yuugi. Please! I don't know why. I used to love that couple, but nay! They got way to cliché. No more, PLEASE!!

I have to admit that my preferences are a Seto/Yami, but I don't care if you pair him with someone else, just no more YY/Y's. As for an ending. Do it whichever way feels right when you get there. I'm sure it'll turn out great! You're a great author!

Thank you so much for this,

~Blue September~