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for Arresting Development

by NeoLizard28

schedule April 27, 2012 at 12:00 AM
is that it? *sad*
person dannigurl
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story. I loved it. I hope its not the end.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo, I loved the story! For a while it seemed as if Seto was the cop but Mokuba!!! And I love the whole demonic Yugi, you should play into that more, maybe another story idea? Anyways, i don't cazet}hether it is Seto or Mokuba, I love Yugi centric ficcies with either (or both) Kaiba brothers.
person hmmm
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you should finish this its very dirty kinda good umm is the cop kaiba. don' write such short chapters
person mikochef22
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this... i think i know where its going but i really want to see more of it... please continue ... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person mikochef22
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this... I think I may know where its going... and i really want to know if im right! ....please continue with it as soon as you can ... Thank You Very Much ;) ~>mc~>
person Morghann
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o Well, the beginning certainly gets my attention. Now, why doesn't this guy want Yugi to get a good look at his face? Hmmm??? ^_-
person Lord Agent D.
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start to this story. I enjoyed the style and the subject matter quite a bit, and can't wait for more. However, if the cop's Kaiba, I'm going to be more than a little frustrated with you for dragging it out so long. (laughs)
person Neko
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just have one question who is the cop and is one of yugi's emenies?
person Shakster
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yah.... another great chapter... hurry and update again....

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