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June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was cool, I like this fanfic. I can't wfor for the next chapter. ^_^
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June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And so the plot thickens. Poor Noa, being made to do all the dirty work. Great work! ^^
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May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“I don’t care…I’ll sleep with you…let you fuck me, if you get me out of here.” *throws confetti* Go for it!! Woohoo, let's hear it for desperation!! *laughs* Sweet moves on Jou's part. Gotta love Seto's way of dealing with that kiss. Poor Noa, being thought of as expendable that way. Sheesh. Can't wait to see if they all make it out. Sooooo, let me ask this quesiton: With the old lady sitting in the rocking chair, are we talking Seto's got his own personal Norman Bates??
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
KB
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!
KB
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May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh, poor kaiba. Poor mokuba - and poor jou! although i'd actually feel a little sorry for stalker-boy when he gets a hold of him! ^_^
This is brilliant. I'm really enjoying it - and looking forward to seeing what eventuates. Your writing is wonderfully fluent and you have a great grasp of the characterisation you've used.
please write more soonish ^_^
This is brilliant. I'm really enjoying it - and looking forward to seeing what eventuates. Your writing is wonderfully fluent and you have a great grasp of the characterisation you've used.
please write more soonish ^_^
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May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noo! Poor Seto! And poor Jou! I wanted to see their date!!! Oh well...
Anyway, greatry, ry, hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen!
Anyway, greatry, ry, hope you update soon! Can't wait to see what's gonna happen!
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May 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kaiba! I hope Jou comes and kicks Kotei's slimy ass to the moon.
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o.O Kaiba got kidnapped?! Ack! Poor Kaiba! Poor Mokuba!
Jou: Poor me! T_T
Erm...right. Anyhow, great chapter once again. ^^ Love your stuff. Very well written.
Jou: Poor me! T_T
Erm...right. Anyhow, great chapter once again. ^^ Love your stuff. Very well written.
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May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is by far the best fanfiction that is still being updated on adultfanfic.net. Every time I come here, it is with dreams of new chapters of this story. I kid you not. PLEASE update again as soon as possible, and thank you SO much for writing!
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Woah...this is one good story, and an original plot too! I like how you've established the relationship between Jou and Seto, it's a fresh change from the norm. I also like how you haven't made Jou seem sweet and weak and fluffy. He can be dangerous, and you've shown that. Good work. ^^
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May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kaibe nee needs Jounouchi to cuddle him and take away all the nasty feelings.