AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Betrayal and Murder

by Bloodline

person yaoi-pervert
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
eey


I love it .. :D That's all I have to say


xxx Linda
person JD
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me that your 9 years old otherwise there is no excuse for this story. Have you ever watched the show? Do you know
what totally out of charr tor to the point of being someone else is? Please save the readers of the world some greif, ok the readers
of the world that are over the age o yea years old. Oh wait... isn't this supposed to be an adult site?

Hey kid, go find your parents and have them enroll you into a writing class.

person Caska (to lazy to sign in)
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you dont find many Seto/Bakura story's more Seto/Ryou so i was kind of suprised to see a Seto/Bakura but couldnt resist reading it :D it's a good story although Bakura is a bit OOC but thats okay. As for the spelling i only found one mistake but then again im not from a country where they speak english :P I hope you update soon cause i really want to read the lemon :D

Love
Caska
schedule March 4, 1920 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the reviews and JD I thanx for the compliment you called me 9, thats so NIce infact I'm 7 :D