rate_review Reviews

Wow. You're an awesome writer! I really *reallnjoynjoyed this fic...(really, really!) Well done!

Tanya~

Heh. I would call this smut.

I think the reason your stories seem to confuse people is because you use an extremely layered style of writing, with many complex sentences. It's not a bad thing in and of itself, but it makes for a slow read and can cause confusion when it comes to the action that the sentences are describing. The ephemisms can also make it more difficult to read and understand.

You have a gift for writing sensually, though, which balances this out. And you have good characterizations, which makes this an overall good story. Nice work!

(I've never seen anyone use the term "baulked" in a fanfic before. Bonus points. *grin*)