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for Aww nuts!

by darkvixen

person Kumori
schedule August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome fic!!! Me likes alot!!!!! Keep going, I wanna see more lemon written like this! Meow~haha!!!!!
person SweetMisery
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue soon with the Squirrly wrath
person Nakia
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chitter chitter, squeak chitter, chitter sqeak sqeakity Ryou, Chitter squeak Bakura. Squeak squeak, chitter, chitter sqeakity Malik and Marik!!! Chitter chitter squeak NEEEEEEEP!!!!! Chitter squeak, Squeakity. PS: Chitter neep! ^_____^
person DirtyD
schedule July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"Settle down Marik, the invasion isn’t until they’ve genetically engineered a new type of super poodle and they’ve found a way to cover the world in yarn." I always thought is was when they found a bearded-lady with three arms and took control of the weather to make it rain cream pies... Damn, I'm always getting it wrong ain't I? lol Trail mix? What the hell is Marik doing with trail mix? Is the man insane?! Mmmmm, Marik's nuts... What was I writing for again?
person Kat
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just about hurt myself laughing at the chapter title!! Frankly, "Malik's nuts on the trail" sounds like a painful personal problem! *ducks* Of course, this was after I screamed seeing that you'd updated!

*snorks* "I resisted screaming as it tried to suffocate me with its furry butt tail thing of doom."
I love it!! *laughs*

"A large, chubby squirrel sat in the middle of the road with a little cigar in his mouth and an armani jacket."
*falls over laughing* Oh my god! It's the GodRodent!

“he said ‘blond that kill us, big nuts, big bulge, within clothes, give us, then apologies’”
*roars* Wham, Bam and I'm sorry Ma'am! *giggles* Oh yeah, who doesn't want that big bulge... *blinks* Oohhh I so did not just say that!

Ohhhhhh _those_ nuts. *blushes* whoopsie

OOO super poodle carrying yarn?? where? Where? (I'm a knitter, why wouldn't I look for yarn?)

YES!! Begin with the squirrelly demise!! Wait!! That's it?! AWWWWWW NUTS

KB
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well I'm a lazy reviewer >< but after reading every single one of your YGO fics I felt you deserved a review from me... I'm sooo lazy...plah...sowwie. Anyways, I really like your fics and I'm looking forward to an update for all of them; I'm definately staying tuned and knowing that you update your fics makes me happy ( hate reading a good fic when the writer stops updating, breaks my heart T_T) Anyways, great job and I really hope you update soon! Squirrels...heh...mofia...heheh...interesting indeed.
person Kat
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"after all, the guy stuck me in the butt with some thing and carried me off" *glares at Bakura for making her choke on her tea* Gah, I almost got it all over the boss' computer!

*starts snickering* Yeah, kill all dem rodents! No one is safe from those rodents! *giggles hysterically* the squirrels have a queen as well as a Capo? Oooo this ought to be good! Oh waaaaiiiiit, she's a squirrel goddess? *laughs* The rodents have a Squirrelly goddess for a queen?? *falls over*

Loved it! No more woozles?

KB
person Kat
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*rubs head* I guess your right about the Bakura growl thing, he just him me with a weasel. >_

Awwwww poor thing. You've been Woozled! *blinks* Tsk, Naughty Bakura. Oh wait... That's a good thing! Naughty Bakura is a very good thing, ne?

KB
person bakurasgirl
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
mmm...lemon! That was hot and good and hot and....hot. By the way, your last chappie didn't show up.
person Kat
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
"I’m so moosed, I so totally moosed out in the last chapter, my moose was to the moose, you know what I mean? "
*affects valley girl voice* Ohmigod! I like, so totally know what you mean! *blinks and snickers*

Ooohooo!!! Lemons! Yaaaaay, I like lemons! Dayum!!! Great lemon. Although I could swear I heard Bakura growl at being described as a _little_ sacrifice... *g* Loved the officer! (kept imagining the one I know from work hooting - I'm sooo in trouble for that if he ever finds out) Pigeons derinering stuff. Gods, carrier pigeons? Oooo that visual of Bakura sitting on Seto in just his boxers had me howling.

It's soooo sweet that Bakura's doing all of this for Ryou. Yeah, screwing Malik and Marik is a really sweet thing for him to do. *laughs* Hell I'm not complaining in any way, shape or form! More please!!