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for This is just wrong

by akuchan

person TildTrin
schedule November 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Gah, I've no idea when you posted this or how long it's been, but please update. This is well written and intense!
person Koejii
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story
person Noble D
schedule September 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! I can't wait for the next chapter!
person Anon
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful as always, and I hope to see more soon; not just on this piece, but all of you other works, both old and new. Now if you would excuse me, you have given me a craving for Pegasus and Jounouchi fics - and here I am a Devoted SetoxJounouchi fan.


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person yukiko
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good beginning so far, can't wait to see more of it
person jounou
schedule April 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.o I'm impressed... and seduced! where's the rest of it? I definately want to see more.
person CECILE
schedule March 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think is well written and liked it very much. The detail in the description of the story really got me. I love the fact that Pegasus is alone and in need of love and care. Plus I can see Pegasus as the one to approach Joey because he is older and I guess he should be the one to make the first move. Congratulation on the story
person Kabuki
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great! Very hard to find a decent Pegasus/anyone fic where he's not some sadistic rapist or something, and [airing him with Jounouchi is really inventive. I can easily see them hitting it off well, even though Cecelia's memory and Joey's loyalty to his friends would be rather large hurdles. Maybe if some spark grows between them, Pegasus might not vanish so suddenly as he did in canon. And as sweet as he is, Jounouchi really needs a secret admirer. ;-) Please continue soon!
person Shadow2997
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Plz finish this story plz plz plz plz plz plz plz i would really apreachiate it if you did this is a great story!!
person DirtyD
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say I love unusual pairings. The idea of JoeyxPegasus certainly is one. Reading this has not been a disappointment. Well, it kind of has... because there wasn't any 'action' this chapter. That is why I pray you won't keep me hanging for long. ^_^ Your skill in writing isn't too shabby either. (Translation: It's great.)