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for Domination

by Borath

person Callisto
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
i've read both of your stories and you really did a great job! It took me more than a week, but I loved every minute of it!
I can't wait to read more of your work ( so make more ok? pleasie? ) ^_^
person hato_chiisai
schedule May 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I've been following these fics all the waom Som Subbmission on ff.net. I love them. You do a fabulous job of making how Yami is handling all this seem so real. Can't wait for the next chapter.
schedule May 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Good, good, good.
LD: Yay for Yami Malik!
Karen: * smacks LD with laptop * NO! He is a "bad guy" in this!
LD: So what? He is still friggin' cool! I just love him!
Karen: Well, that was a pretty cool turn of events! Kudos. Can't wait to see what you are gonna do next!
person Zera
schedule May 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
more pz!!!
i will be your frined!!!
person Silverflashpup
schedule April 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
OH! NO! NO! NO! YOU EVIL, EVIL, EEEEEEEVIL AUTHOR! *dangles helplessly on the cliff* I swear, if you expect us to just let you study for exams and stuff after -THAT-, you, my friend, have another thing coming. This thing is TOO DAMN GOOD to be abandoned, so getcher ass up in front of the screen and WRITE. WRITE. WRITE.

Yum. Angst.
person teela
schedule April 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Great job!
I've read a lot of your works and I think most of them are intreguing.
person Kaede
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yami and 'Kura...oh well...Nice fic
schedule April 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Oh no! Will you never stop torturing them?
LD: Humph. It never ends. And this pretty much sucks. I mean, with the tape thing still up in the air, this obviously wasn't over yet...
Karen: stilstill. I am not happy about this. Not at all. *begs on knees* Please make it better! Please!
LD: No, I didn't mean the story sucks. The story is awesome. All of this torture sucks. Please update again asap.
person duckie
schedule April 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I think your y isy is really great. I read the first one and I just had to read this one. I don't remember if I reviewed this before or not but it's totally awesome. I think you're doing a good job and I can't wait to read the next chapter but by all means take your time. I know il bel be well worth the wait. :)
person Abeno Yasuaki
schedule February 20, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I realize this just now after having finished reading the current chapters of Submission and Domination, but... where is Malik? O_o

That aside, both series are incredible: the characterization is realistic and close to the original one; the flow of the story is well-paced and easy to follow -- not too quick, just right; the plot is not one expected to happen to Yami, but that's exactly what makes it interesting! It's really excellent! My only problems so far is that Jounouchi's name is the Americanized one and he's talking like a typical Texan (or just American), but I can at least get over the first. :D I'll be waiting to see what will happen next to the gang.