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November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi!
I'm not sure if you gave up writing this story or not, as its been a few years, but I have thoroughly enjoyed reading Domination (and the prequel, Submission). I think both of the stories give a well-developed insight on real-world problems, and Domination especially embraces dynamic characters (something that you don't see often in fanfiction).
I really do hope that you haven't walked away from this story yet as I think you can write a fantastic ending. Keep up the great work... and I'll be sure to visit your other stories. =]
I'm not sure if you gave up writing this story or not, as its been a few years, but I have thoroughly enjoyed reading Domination (and the prequel, Submission). I think both of the stories give a well-developed insight on real-world problems, and Domination especially embraces dynamic characters (something that you don't see often in fanfiction).
I really do hope that you haven't walked away from this story yet as I think you can write a fantastic ending. Keep up the great work... and I'll be sure to visit your other stories. =]
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October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
have been re-reading this it gets better every time i do please please please post a new chappie soon!!!
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August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! How much more pain is Yami gonna have to take??? And is Bakura still alive??? OMG I can't wait for the next chapter please post it soon!!!
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July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't meaan to sound impatient but I think it's long overdue for an update.
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May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
0.0 *in shock* You had better update this fic soon! I can't bear to think of what *might* happen for very long... tell me what *will* happen and you will put my mind at ease.... (maybe)
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April 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this series. . even if you do hurt my precious.
But this series is so well written and the subject is so original!
<3's for you!
please don't end it T_T!
But this series is so well written and the subject is so original!
<3's for you!
please don't end it T_T!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It was all well worth the wait. Hope everything gets settled so you can write more.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^___________^ OMG, I was jtalktalking about this fic earlier today! I love everything you have written, beautifully done! The emotions, the characters, the events! You are God...>.>...<.<...XD no lightning bolt. I'm ever so happy you updated, and I won't press you for another because any length of time is well worth the wait for what you write. ^_^ Love your work!
~YamiRynEnjeru
~YamiRynEnjeru
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February 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *cough* where was I ? oh yeah NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO, why? why? WHY? DAMN CLIFFHANGERS!!!!!!!! I Hate them, WHY? Please, Please *on knees* write I need to know what happen. Well my ranting is over, thats some great writing. Oh no I going to rant again. NOOOOOOOOOOOo why please write.
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July 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You pbly bly don't remember but I read Submission when it was on fanfiction.net and I was so excited when I found this story on here. This is so good! I loved Submission but this one totally tops it. You've really outdone yourself. Keep going ^^.