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by Borath

person Suicidal Skies
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. Its a lovely fic thats heart warming...heh, I like yami rapes so this one was fresh, and new XD..as soon as I log on its going under recomended..good job XD
person DS
schedule September 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I must say I really enjoy this fic! *nods* Read it all throughout the night...and I'm blaming you if I dream something angsty tonight! XD Great fic! Love the sweet plot! Now I'm off to get my limited 3 hours p...p... T______T
schedule May 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really did capture the depression/suicide attempts fairly well. Having gone through a suicidal phase myself, I can honestly say that you got Yami's feelings across very well. Maybe not as good as it could have been, but the true depth of it all can only truly be gotten across by someone who's experienced it. All in all, I think it was a wonderfully written fic with a lot of emotion put into it at the right places
person EgyptianGenie
schedule January 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is increadable! You have surfaced an issue that needs to be recognized and paid attention to. I have been to the depression stage and back a couple times. But no where near that bad. I hope I never will and if I do reach that stage, I will keep this fic. in mind. ;c)
person DKD
schedule January 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I truly enjoyed your story. I hope your friend is doing better. They have a great friend in you. You're the type of person some of us need nowadays. wri writing and peace out!!!!!!!!!!!
person Fenix
schedule December 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was a really good fic!! poor yami, at least everything came out okay in the end.
person Deshret/Fechin_Lefay
schedule August 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh... wow, wow, wow.

This is so connecting!

Many people often think I'm just a quiet anti-social girl, or a bubbly artsy person, without a care. But no, I often feel like crap because I'm the unpopular girl, the 'ugly boy-girl', I can't focus or concentrate on my schoolwork, and my parents didn't understand.

Wow, in so many ways, Yami in this fic was so much like me, I can really feel connected to him there.

Too bad I didn't have a Joey or a Yugi in my life that I can turn to for support.

Reading this, reading his struggles, and the support he gets...

Well... it helped me, the ending gave me the first genuine smile I had in a few weeks.

Domo Arigato.... Thank you.... Gracias....
person bloody gem
schedule May 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM
very good fic well writen
person Shorty*
schedule May 4, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yami! All that mental stress. The puzzle trap and Bakura's help were nice additions to the story. It's written well and very emotional.
person adalee222
schedule February 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I saw this story in fanfiction.net already. And I still feel like to review in here. It is an excellent fic, and I feel re sor sorry for

Yami. He shouldn't blame himself for his feelings. No one wanted to be raped, even that will protect his other half. And I love

domination too, please continue the good work here.