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for I Give My Heart To You

by Liscar

person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Tris' parents are SO dead!!!
DD: Get in line, Dragon.
YD: My boy BETTER be okay.
DD: Yeah! We know where you live!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glares at Terra* Ok, no killing. You have a point. Hun, that was sad!! Good, but sad. I am glad that all went well for Joey, but Tris better be OK!! Hee. Ok, my birthday week is now almost complete. I just need DDYD to update!! Lord. Are you a fan of NASCAR? I was starting a story with that... I took my son to see THE MOVIE Tuesday!! OH, goodness, it was soooo corny!! NO KURA!! That sucked! Heehee, but all is ok. I still don't like Tea. My son loved it and made me promise to get it when it came out!! UPDATE SOONER>.< this is killing me!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule August 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: Awww...poor Tris!
YD: Damn hot lemon tho.
DD: And I love the way Seto took that woman down a notch. Priceless.
YD: Damn hot lemon tho.
DD: *rolls eyes*
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YD: Damn! I was hoping we were going to get to see Tris jump Joey there.
DD: You know, baby, they need a lemon before you-know-what!
YD: I agree.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods!! @_@ I would have peeped just for the hell of it!! Damn!! Nothing like a bunch of men to show you how to get a man off!! Oh, yes! This was another wonderful chappie!! Very funny and sweet too! Update soon, please!! *holds frog over Amara* or the girl gets it!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Finally I can read and review!!!! Damn!! What a story!!

She was afraid of a FROG?? And Mokuba did it?? SO, what *was* in that drink, anyways?? Pee?? Or something worse??

The whole Kira, Bakura, Yami episode was just too funny!! I was ROTFLMFAO so hard that my son asked me what was so funny. I couldn't stop laughing to answer him!! Damned if that didn't bring back memories of my son's childhood too!!

So, it's Pegsy that's behind it all?? Amara is the Keeper?? And Daddy Dearest is loose here too?? Oh, this just keeps getting deeper and more complicated!!

Here comes the bride!!! LOVELY LEMON!!! So, wedding at the end?? Draw straws, too funny!!

Take care an update soon!!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's getting better though! I know that chocolate cereal is out!!! LOL!!

Anyways, Lemons are yummy! 'Specially if their out-of-control lemons!!! That was a good story!! I think I am gonna start putting pen to paper, as I actualld a d a brainstorm last night on which direction my story is going!! And, I will say this now, if something I write sounds like your work, let me know. I am *not* trying to copy anyone, but when I get something stuck in my head, I might use it by mistake. Interested in Betaing??? I'll need one.....

Update soon, kay??

Lady Elfskye
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: *giggle* I can SO see Seto in that scene in the doc's office.
YD: He's going soft.
DD: It's too cute.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's not just the schedule, but also learning what they can, and cannot, have anymore. Things that were trivial before become super-stimulants, worse than caffiene!! But, anyways, as to your story.

Poor Grandpa!! I am sooo glad that Amara was there! Yugi and Yami!! YUM!!

Later girl!!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's aaahhh....gone. I don't think I can get anything going right now. We just started a med schedule with my son for ADHD and things are a bit wired around here.

Anyways, another wonderful chappie!! Priceless sneeze!! Keep up the good work!!

Lady Elfskye