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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my goodness!! That was one of the sweetest chappies that I have ever read!! I have tears in my eyes from the sweetness and laughter. Everything was just so cool! *Squishes Aten softly* Stay back boys, this chibi needs a rest!! Wow!! Umi is so cute too!! Aria, crying, and happily?? I wonder what she's gonna give him in return?? Oh, are you gonna get back to Yugi?? Just wondering.

Looking forward to next time!

Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWWWWWW!!!! That was a totally sweet chappie!! Aten must be in heaven!!! It's great to have friends like that to be with you no matter what. Miranda is lucky to have those guys with her and Robbie. *squishes Aten and Seto plushies, places Ryou and Bakura plushies in compromising positions* Hmm, need more plushies...

Anyways, I t I h I have a feeling I'll be helping Tris squish Aten!! Take care!!

Lady Elfskye
person Terra
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter left me with the best feeling. It was so touching. The camp and how Aten felt and then Miranda and Marik, both were simply touching.
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeals in delight* Oh i'm so happy for Aten!! You'll need to hold me back cuz i wanna hug him until he can't breathe!! *giggles* I swear I can almost picture the arts adn craft Aten was doing. I know Tirsten and Seto will love their gifts. Also, Miranda and marik kinda remind me of really close friends. And that Daniel is such a sweet heart!! He'll understand. I love your story so much!!! *giggles happily*
person Lully-chan
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh...I forgot it was time for an update today~ So I was surprised (and super happy :D) when I saw this. Anyway: ::squeal:: Aten is soooo adorable! I thought the part where he said Aria sent her bike to the Shadow Realm was hilarious. ^0^ Aten is quite the little artist, I see. At last the poor little guy has been accepted and has some new friends...I feel so happy now! ::big grin::
schedule July 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey there was up, i'm back, didn't even know i was gone did ya ^^ well i caught up with all thapysapys i missed, this storie just keeps getting batter wonderful_writer_bakurasgirl ^^ poor miranda, though im glad Aten is having a good time ^^
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are very right about that revenge deal As lon Ver Vera gets what is coming to her then I'll be happy. Oh poor Miranda... *wiping away tears* My cousin went through the same thing and lost her first baby like that but she wasn't very far along but god it still hurt. I think what touched me the most was when Seto willingly gave miranda a hug since she really needed one. Aye they are such great friends to be there for her. Seems Aten made a new frien I' I'm very happy there. Aye one again you have outdone yourself. I bow to you, the great master of writing *bows deeply*
person Lully-chan
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::sighs sadly and schnuggles up with her Malik plushie:: ;_; Poor Miranda and Robbie. It was nice of Marik to be there for her! ::glomps him:: Malik is so lucky. AHAHAHA! =P Can't wait for another update.
person Terra
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Caught up again. That was a very emotional chapter. It was nice to have the uplift of Aten at camp after so much unhappiness. And Seto is such a good guy, hugging Miranda like that.
person Isawa17
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww. that's so sad! She lost her baby! T_T_T