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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I know I should have expected it but eww!! No wonder I don't want to go into the medical fieshudshudders* Oh poor Ryou and no no no!! I ahte Yami!! *tortures yoodoo doll of him* And hey, if you kill for (for such an evil cliffe) then who would finish the story? Better to wait it's done then kill you ^^ j/k
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July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes my eyes* Bakura can't die!! *hugs Bakura* I love him too much to let him doe. He has to be okay!
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
noo...yessss.... i mean nooo... bakura cant be taken by yami... no matter how good a scene like that would be...erg... i cant decide... too bad bakura couldn't just suck random ppls life force...
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July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! What a chappie! Poor Yugi. Damn, Ra, Damn it!! Poor Bakura!! I cannot believe that Aria did that!! Such a rollercoster chappie!!
Can't wait till next time!!
Lady Elfskye
Can't wait till next time!!
Lady Elfskye
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no... no no no!! Yami now has control of Bakura? ewewewewew!!!!!!!! Now i'm gonna have nightmares. Aye good story, getting up there wiht the suspense. I can't wait to see the next chapter friday.
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
“What made you think you had any right to fire that ball of energy to your brother?” Marik asked angrily.
Ryou gasped. “Youndy, dy, did you throw a ball of energy to your brother?”
Aria’s bottom lip trembled. “Yes, mommy.”
LMAO! Lessons in parenthood Yu-Gi-Oh style! I loved that! Very creative! Fantastic job:-)
Ryou gasped. “Youndy, dy, did you throw a ball of energy to your brother?”
Aria’s bottom lip trembled. “Yes, mommy.”
LMAO! Lessons in parenthood Yu-Gi-Oh style! I loved that! Very creative! Fantastic job:-)
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July 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's amazing how children act out their fear. That was very wonderfully done. Can't wait for the goodbye lemon. Very sweet and sad. I loved this.
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July 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I love all of your stories so much, but I have a hard time keeping up with you because you update so quickly! I love your characterization! The kids have got to be the best OCs EVER made! And I love Miranda and Robbie too! You have such a wonderful talent; I hope you never give up! Give Ryou a kiss for me! Update soon! (i know you will!)
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay everyone say it with me 'aaaawwwwwwwww!!!!!!!!' Hee I think Hayden would be a great racer and Aten a great painter. So he does have a slight flaw when it comes to art. He does his best and he's so cute. I found that whole guardian angel bit really sweet too. Oh and Umi and Aria are just so adorable and mako is a riot. Lemme guess, teh gang won't find out the cure until too late? Love your story and am so glad you're writing it too. laterz!
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July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh the camp reunion brought back memories of all the weird stuff I have packed away from my son's creativity. It's all treasures to me though.
Very nice that reunion, seems like a lot of fun there.
Very nice that reunion, seems like a lot of fun there.