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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Terra
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
FINE!!! Make me cry!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just ed ted to leave you these lyrics. They are from the hard rock group Skid Row. I just listened to this song and thought of Ryou an Aten. http://www.sos-fosternet.org/lyr14.html It's called "In a Darkened Room". It's actually a power ballad. Really good song. Hits home for me as well. Thought you'd like the lyrics.

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cringes and looks away* Oh nonono!! I know you gave me warning but i don't beleive it!! You are evil *small smile* But evil in a good way, if that's possible. I take it, it won't be much longer until Marik follows Bakura, I mean in death, right? And Ryou has hte kids and his friends there so, he's not alone. I better go I'm starting to get all teary-eyed. Can't wait for Wednesday but if aff goes screwy i'll jsut review at mm.org
person ShadowofLight
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I actually feel comforted by Rhea's words. The kids are gonna have fun but still... Sorry this is short I have a math test to study for tomorrow. But good chapter.
person PharaohYamisPrincess
schedule July 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*wipes my eyes but continues crying* Not many fics get me crying but yours still has me going. *hugs Ryou and Aria*
person chaos queen
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries and hugs bakura*
T_T bakura is dying! how's ryou going to cope?
why must the sexy suffer so?
person Kanika
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bakura.
I can't believe he's going to die.
I mean, Marik is still feeling okay, and Ryou gave up so much Life to him, why is it happening?
And what's with Aria? Without the father that loved her so much.
The only thing that keeps me from getting sad is that they will find a cure, hopefully soon, and you would never kill Bakura off.
But then, there's still Yami. Gods.. When will he finally be beaten? *throws knives at Yami*

Woah, you're writing for over 20 years now? That's why you're soo good! I hope, when I'm older, I'll still be writing as well. Through, I don't think I'll ever give it up, because of the reason I began and it's just 6 years ago I began. That remembers me that actually I'm not allowed to be here, with all the lemons and me being underage.. XP

Hm, I think,
at this point I need to thank you for such a good Fic, the wonderful moments given to us all by reading it, whether they were saunnyunny thrilling and thank you for teaching me some more English!
person aspiker
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nooooooooo! He can't be going!

A very powerful chapter you've written. I'd watch out handing out those instruments of destruction, though.........

person Lady Elfskye
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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*sobs hysterically*
*Passes out cold**


Lady Elfskye



person Lully-chan
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed in so long...I've been working almost every night and haven't had time. ToT I can't believe Bakura's dying! I actually crieen Ien I read this chapter; so sad, so sad. ::grabs some tissues:: ;___;