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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Kschur32
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great first chapter. Hope Aten is ok. Poor Miranda. Waiting for the next chapter.
person ShadowofLight
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
... Oh my lord Anubis... I don't know if I should cry or throw a tantrum. Aten's really sick and Miranda jsut lsot her husband and now that Yami Virus is loose. The only good thing I can see is that Miranda has Ryou to help her out wcomfcomfort, Aten has friends who care about him, and Yami will get sick from the virus. I don't like him and I still think Yugi can do better than him. Yeah what's the most embaressing thing to being a parent? Having your kids walk in on you while having sex. What a way to start a new story in this chronicle.
person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awww... thats so sad... poobbiobbie... keep updating
person Terra
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man what a cliffhr!! r!! Great!! Cargo bay is a good place for an explosion too.
Chibi wants to see how much love they have made. (snicker) Gymnastics! LMAO I wanna do 'gymnastics' with Bakura too. Wonder how he does with uneven bars?
person MarikIshtar77
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice way to start! Lemony goodness!
Ryou's honesty scares me! I like Bakura's excuse-gymnastics......lmfao! It can't get much better than that! (Damn, Bakura would look hot in skin tight black spandex...)
I have a bad feeling aboutandaanda's hubby-kins.....*Big hugs to Miranda and Robbie*

person Isawa17
schedule April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOw! my really like this one so far! I also like the end of your last one ^-^ can't wait to see the next chapter!