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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Dragearsears
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excuse me while I go kill Yami... *slinks away* *screaming can be heard in the distance*
person Jupitor Knight
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH WOW I'VE FINALLY CAUGHT UP. I don't believe it. I've finally caught up to you. It took me 3 weeks but i finally was able to catch up. I started about three weeks ago to read the first story in the series and i thought i'd never catcyh up up your writing is so goooooood that i ended up missing class just to see what would happen in the next chapter. Wow it is so good to know that now i can follow it like everyone else. You've got really good plot development on your characters adn i'm really impressed. I love this story and would it be to much to ask for an email when you update. If it is don't worry i know your busy i'll just have to constantly check when it says you'll update.
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Panick?! B-But I thought he was dead or something. Ooh that guy is just plain creepy. Please please please can I torture Yami and that bitchy lady scientist? Or better yet! let Aria send them to the Shadow Realm and let her Nightmare Dragon eat them or something! Please?? Panick deserves it for being a freak and stuff, that lady deserves it for permanently scarring Seto, and Yami deserves it for being the pharaoh of all jackasses and such. That Fiend Artisit sounds like a neat card and Anzu in a Art Museum? Oh lord there goes all that priceless artwork... Hey does she still have that scorpion? I love your stories so much!!
person Terra
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The plot thickens. Nice lin tin there.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love Aria! She's so cute! The dialog between her and Yami is just too funny! (Ass card, ROLMFAO!) Great job!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That is so wrong. But then again, Yami just being allowed to *be* is wrong. Poor Yugi. I wonder when he will wisen up. He reminds me of a person stuck in an abusive relationship. In love with the person, to blind to see what is happening to them and everyone else due to his love. Unable to se ref refusing to believe what that person is capable of. Like my grandmother. Or my mom. It took my grandfather almost killing my mom to get my grandmother to get the nerve to tell him to leave. I really feel for him, but I hope it won't take a death to get him to realize what he turned loose.

Damn, someone is gonna die and soon once Aria goes missing. My guess is Panik first. Ohhhh Hurry up Thursday!!!


Lady Elfskye
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, my Ra!! That was hilarious!!! arrgh!! That woman makes me ill!! Daniels home!! Horray!! No one better hurt Aria, or she'll hurt them!!! Sorry for the short review, but chibis screaming at each other is not a good sound. It means that my niece is about to go slightly like Aria on my son!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Kschur32
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Seto fanited! I was cracking up reading kisskissing fish and where babies come from part. Poor Seto. Anzu a little, ok a lot, on the insane side here. Greart chapter.
person Dragon Tears
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeep! Who's Seto's enemy? Do I know them from one of your stories? I'll try my best for the fanart, don't blame me if it turns out really crappy...
person Caterfree10
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

Oh my gosh I cannot believe what I have read! Okay, I technically haven't read much of anything yet (Hey, it's late at night, I haven't been online in God knows how long, and to top it all off, the 'rents are PO'd at me for two things that will barely scratch my science grade. ><), but from what I hve read while putting it in MSWord to read later (Like I said, no time N E more with school coming to a close and Finals for Algebra coming up [I tell ya, having Algebra I in 8th grade SUX!!!!]) I tunntunned to read some of this stuff! I-I'll say more after I've fully read the updates since my last visit. I'll be back ASAP!!!!

Ja Ne! ^_~

PS, don't worry about me and the MSWord thing, I always delete it as I read it so the 'rents won't find out (Let's just say thay aren't too fond of gay relationships *Glares at them* Ah well, screw 'em).