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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heh, boy I really like Miranda!! Oh, poor Seto!! I feel so bad for him...NOT!! LOL!! Oh, goodness!! Next chappie, puppy love!! MMMRRROOOWWW!!!! This cat likes it!! Glad that Daniel doesn't mind. About Robbie and Aten. Ya know, for having three chibis(one not potty trained...YUK!) in the house that day, Saturday sounds good!!!


Waiting patiently...

Lady Elfskye
person Jade
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::falls over lmao::oh gods that was a hilarious chapter, I love it! Poor Seto..you are sooo mean to that guy hehehe::snickering fit, then tilts head::seriously though...how is robbies father going to react if aten and robbie get together eh?
person Camille
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So when is Daniel going to beat the crap out of Marik? HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH!!

Daniel: Stop flirting with my wife, you psychopervert!

Marik: It wasn't my fault it was...(looks around) HIM!!

Yami: ME? YOU SON OF A BITCH!!!

Marik laughs his ass off as Yami is being beaten up by a very pissed off husband!
person Dragon Tears
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was funny! Poor poor Seto... Nothing like torturing a homophobic to get rid of your stress... *Steven hanging from the ceiling upsidedown bond and gaged with four knives sticking out*
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DD: GODS!
YD: Ah, Miranda...a woman after my own heart.
DD: But...you TEASE!! You left it in the middle of a lemon!!
YD: That she did. Maybe afteeryoeryone's in bed tonight we can steal the disk and read it.
DD: Kinda helps living with her, doesn't it?
person star
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this storie is great .I have a question though when will the virious start effecting thee yamis . I liked that little fight with yami and and areia thats cute . Ive done that before kinda play fighting with my fiends eight year old they some how have this d pod power to make you act just like them but ist fun
person yoai lover
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey Im new hear you a very good writer and i was just wondering if you were going to do another yami and bakura confertation i liked that little run iiin . I wish i could find some seperate stories like that
person yoai lover
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey Im new hear you a very good writer and i was just wondering if you were going to do another yami and bakura confertation i liked that little run iiin . I wish i could find some seperate stories like that
person Liann
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow. cure for cancer... cool!! ^^
yesh i sent in the piccy of ryou and baku
and shadows was awsome!!!!!!!! luved it!!!!!!!!!
*blows up*
*blaming the butterflies*
cant wait to read the next chappie!!!
person Jade
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa DANG, I'm gone for a week or so and you already have all this done? whew, I wish i was this good at writing ^.^
the chapters are amazing, major funny with seto fainting because of the kids talking::snicker fit::poor guy
the idea with aria's blood was neat..where'd ya come up with that?, anyway, hope to see more chappies soon!