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Wow!! Damn those two heathens!! Poor Tris and Otogi!! *huggles Aten softly, singing an Egyptian lullaby to him* Poor little chibi!! He's been hurt so much. I think he is a very wonderful child. Your welcome for reading the other story! It was good! So, your going on vacation too? am am I!! I'm staying here in the states, but will be going to PA (Dresher) and Alexandria VA. I won't be back till Monday. So, you'll set my vacation off with a bang too!! LOL!! I hope you'll all have fun!!!

Lady Elfskye

Poor Bakura, he needs a hug in a big way. Marik will comfort him, he's a lucky yami.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I dont want baku to die!!! *clinging to his legs*T.T DONT GO!!!!!!!! *all teary eyed*

and, ive just been wondering, did you make Itemri or is it part of the anime?

my pic is on ..:Shattered Reflection:..'s oekaki board if you wanted to look for it. its on page 4 now but this board moves really fast and could move to a diff page. its called ryou an baku.

*looks around nervously* Sorry 'bout not reveiwing your last chapter... I was really busy, and I couldn't go on the computer for 4 days... Marik Bakura lemon? Lots of blood shed, right?

I like this chapter .so i see they can handle modern secerity pretty well. Marik and Bakura . I hope you have a nice graduation . I thought you could cross the boarders anytiime like you can in mexico . are theccanadians strickter?

I hhope though you don't kill the two yamis off and you find a cure or marik does .

I think that you should have either bakura or Marik do some kind of meld wtih erics mother and then let her see in her mind the terrible things her son does.

Oh neat, graduations are fun if kinda borning. I hope Canada does let you back in and i can't wait for the lemon. I still despise Yami but Yugi... love is blind. Aria, well can't fault her for the truth. For Duke i suggest he presoak it for a full day, take a nice durable brush, and extra strength soap. should remove most of the stain. Or leave it in the washing machine several times ^^ Sorry this is short but I don't want to curse and write all the torture I want to inflict on Rhonda, Eric, Mrs. Barnes, Rhonda's father, Steven, the principal, and Yami and fill this review with it. So I'll write it on a seperate piece of paper. I love all your stories!! You are so one of my favorite authors!!

Whee, I was sick, not at home and couldn’t read and review sooner oO’

I feel so sorry for Aten.
I know how it is when some idiotic bullies thinks it’s a nice free tactiactivity to bully you. They bullied me all the time when I was a chibi and the same people still do it when they see me. Just because I was a very silent kid and crying often. I hope Robbie never has to leave Aten’s side. It’s sweet how he protects him. Good friends are such valuable things on this earth. I also hope Eric and Rhonda will disappear when Aten get’s older. They’are like little devils. Devils! How could they do t-h-a-t? They could kill Aten with what they do!!

Geez, I hope Yami won’t recover soon. He’s such an… oo’

"“It’s a good thing Hayden’s not a girl! We’d have to worry about her first period!”"

OMG that was hilarious, poor Seto!::laughing fit::that poor guy goes through hell every time they tease him about girls doesn't he?::snickers softly and pats seto's arm lightly::there there..

I do hope your not planning on killing the yamis off right? >< you do have it set up where they are gonna be saved??::worriedly looking two ywo yamis over...::

Kids can be oh so cruel, is all too true. The teacher sent the wrong to tto the principals. Aria was just being honest. But what ya gonna do? Poor Otogi needs to learn a new swear word. And give Tris a BIG paddle for Rhonda. Tell him to stop when the thing breaks. Eric's mom needs one too for herself, Aten lying? Yeah right! When pigs fly!