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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Kschur32
schedule May 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't go to AFF for 8 days and I find that I missed 4 chapters. The story is going on. The kids are getting ged? ed? NO NO. Miranda pregnet! Hope it goes well. Loving the story. Congrads on graduating and I hope you enjoy your vacation.
person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oo those chappy's were amazing... poor marik, all he need was a jump start...lol... come back soon^^
person sweetmisery
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooo u let them get caught...*snicker*, watch, aria's like Mewtwo. See yah soon
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For chap 12 I wish I were in Ryou's position ^^ and the arguement, I don't blame bakura. Ooh so not good. Chap 13 I can't beleieve they got Robbie! Ooh I hope they'll be okay but the thing about Aria sending the bee to teh Shadow Realm, hee priceless!! But I wouor hor her to send those bastard brats there so teh Nightmare Dragon can burn them alive. or make them shit their pants every damn second for the rest of their life. Oh and about Miranda, I really hope this pregnance works for her. maybe a cute little girl? Have a safe trip but be sure to have lots of fun. See you then!
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two wonderful lemons!! A new baby on the way!! Wonderful!!
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You left it there??? What the hell??? I am gonna come hunt you down, woman!! I'll only be 30min away!! *Bakura growls at Bakurasgirl--"I'm gonna help
her too!! No one messes with my Chibi Yami!!!!"*

LOL!! Have fun on your vacation!! I hope everything goes well for you and your family!! You're right, you deserve it!!

Lady Elfskye
person star
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have another question is yami going to get his way or are you still thinking about it I thinkkk im asking a to many domb questions sorry /
person Jade
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't want to sound, em...over eager about this but to be perfectly honest...


Its about Time! oh the sweet lemony goodness::purring and drooling::too bad I can't join the boys..merow
person Dragon Tears
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Aria! Miranda's pregnant, *snickers* think how Seto's going to react to that...
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please, I am begging you, don't let them turn to ash. Ryou and Malik and the kids need them! Besides, for psychotic spirits who crave blood they're hot, and it would be inhumane to let them die like that. Hee ^^ Maybe Ishizu can see something that may help them? Aten is just so adorable with his love for monkeys, I could just hug him all day long. Aria is a sweetie too but gee she could almost pass for Bakura's twin... if she were several centuries older give or take. Oh! Please make Panik and that bitch that destroyed Seto's psyche of women pay? Soon, later, whatever as long as they pay. Okay I'm done, bye bye!!
person Jupitor Knight
schedule May 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so good i'll cry now and again later.