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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Liann
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
waaaaaaaa idk who to feel bad for anymore!!!! robbie locked in the crate, aten and his pacemaker, the yamis and the virus (lol), tawaiawaii hikares, aria and the puppy in...the lab place... *runs around in circles confused*><

is aria gonna name the puppy? it'd be so kawaii if she did!! ^^

ive been reading your other stories on your site an, omr, i luv them!! esp the ice cream joke and crab jokes in servent yamis! XD i just luv ur fics alltogether... is that even a word???
person MarikIshtar77
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooo! Aria! Them jerks better not hurt her! Poor baby! The suspense is killin' me!
I thought I was going to lose my mind with no story updates last week! (So I resorted to
going back and re-reading "The Fall of Icarus." I still love that story to bits!:-)
So how was your trip??? Glad you made it back safe! Did you win big on the slot machines in A.C.????
*grin*
Thanks for the update! You rule!

:-)
C.L.
person Dragon Tears
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Must... resist... urge... to... kill... bloody... scientists... Ah, who am I kidding? *stabs all to death*
person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oo no, *vacumes up the dust* might need this for later...i hope aria will be ok... poor robbie
person jupitor knight
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Crap won't the bad guys ever figure out that it isn't smart to kidnap little kids? *growl* oh well i s mas marik and bakura will just have to teach them another lesson.

By the way i love this line. embeember the rules?”
Aria looked up at her father with large brown chibi eyes. “No sending things to the Shadow Realm.”
“And?”
“No sending people to the Shadow Realm.”
“And?” ste stealing people’s souls.”
person Terra
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back! Good update, every parents worse fear, a missing child. Can't wait for the next one.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Welcome back!! I hope you had a great time. As for the story, I am speechless. Absolutely speechless. I cannot believe they did that to her. They will be found. Aria will be rescued. They will pay dearly.

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not sure if my review went through so lemme do another jsut to be safe. okay glad robbie is alive and back home and that umi found him. not glad bakura is geting worse by the second witat dat damn disease. and tonight i will be dreaming of ways to torture panik, that whore diane, and yami. oh and glad aten made it through the surgery successfully. he and aria are sweet chidlren, regardless of who their fathers are. look at steven, biggest bastard alive/dead but ryo the the sweetest thing. glad you're abck and hope you had a good and nice trip. anxiously awaiting saturday to come.
this damn thing better go through... damn aff.net
person sweetmisery
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lassie!!!...lol...will there be a lasting relationship between Aria and Umi???
person Kschur32
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bad evil Scientist. Hurt them...kill them if they hurt Bakura's daughter. Bad bad people. Glad Robby is ok but helo Aria