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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Star
schedule May 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi greeat storei i hope they can get Areia soon but she seems to be takeing care of things her self for such a little girll . and i realy hope you don't let the yamis die and find a cure in tiimeyou can make yami haave a hidden cure aaand make there haave to a price to be paid maybe like freedom but its your stori and i have weird ideas . see ya ps are you still thinkng about a yami bakura lemon .
person MarikIshtar77
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That last part where Aria kicked some keester totally rocked! Awesome! I love it when Aria goes all daddy Bakura on people! Who's got daddy's bloodlust??? *grin*
As for a TrisxOtogi lemon, I say go for it! A frilly pink apron? Wow- he's even girlier than me! My apron is black and says "Johnsonville brats." LOL
person Xenobia
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Definitely need a Tristan x Otogi lemon...makes me feel squishy inside.

I so love Aria...she's a chibi after my own heart. And spleen... And liver... I got goosebumps. *carefully kisses the chibi's cheek*
person Lady Elfskye
schedule May 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH HELL YEAH!! Go Aria!!! Ooohhhh, that was so...so...so...Arrrghh!! *Can't breathe from happy giggles at Aria's fun!* And she took the puppy with her!! How kawaii!! Oh, and Hell Yeah I'd like to see a Tris x Otogi lemon!! You write good lemons!! Sorry that it seems like I haven't reviewed in awhile. The darn things never go thru, and I didn't realize it till today!! So, I hope this one went thru!!


*whimper* Monday?? We gotta wait till Monday?? *sniffle* *whimper* Here's to hoping DDYD updates soon to sorta tide. I just don't think I can wait till Monday.

Lady Elfskye
person Dragon Tears
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Four things I have too say: One, HOW DARE SOMEONE STEAL YOUR LEMON!!!!!!!!!!! *glares at anyone who dare to even THINK about it* Two, Homework's piling up, so I might not have enough time to read and write a reveiw for every chapter, sorry 'bout that. Three, Aria's going to Egypt? Maybe she's found by Isis? And four, Poor Bakura! He has no idea WHAT he's doing, and he'l most likely be blamed for it! Kinda reminds me of Malik in this story's prequel...
person bakachibi_voidfox
schedule May 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay, bakuras getten down with his bad self... or rather his bad selfs getten down with Ryou...wither ways fine ^^

more evil bakura please... yum... mwahahha! poor aria, poor aten.... but yay for memory losing virus affected bakura squee!
person sweetmisery
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yay, Aten will be capture...WITH MARIK and be sent with his sister they are saved...(shifty eyes) or are they...*cackle*
person ShadowofLight
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh they were so damn close!!! Hey wait, if Seto gets the card maybe he can track that stupid whore down!! Oh man poor Aria, she's gonna need years of therapy and Aten!! The Bakura, okay I can understand hte virus is makinm rem revert but geez! I jsut--want to beat him with a form rubber bat. Hey it's safer than a real bat. As for someone stealing your lemon, how compeltely and utterly rude and cowardly!! I admit your lemons are great to read but a true writer doesn't steal opther people's works. Okay i better stop there before i get carried away. Love your story and I'm glad Ryou has Seto to be there for him. Set is sushc a sweetie ^^ and hayden... puberty bites.
person Dragon Tears
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Go Seto! Kick Davis' ass!
person Xenobia
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE continue...I'm keeping my fingers crossed for the chibis!